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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review chapter 1
Wow, great battle scene. I was really worried for Alweyn - knew he would face his brother. I was very surpise that his brother didn't kill him - I think it was the good brother and not the one he fought with at the village. Even Darcia liked him and LET him escape, didn't see that coming.
Of course, your writing was great and as always I look forward to the next chapter.
Please update soon.
Wow, great battle scene. I was really worried for Alweyn - knew he would face his brother. I was very surpise that his brother didn't kill him - I think it was the good brother and not the one he fought with at the village. Even Darcia liked him and LET him escape, didn't see that coming.
Of course, your writing was great and as always I look forward to the next chapter.
Please update soon.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rather liked this story so far there are some spelling mistakes but i forgive you, Darcia seems hot. I'm going to pop off and read the first bit.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im so happy you decided to continue with the story, is it going to end up being a series or a trillagy or something. i enjoyed the first story, and the plot synopsis is intreeging, i can't wait to see what happens next.
I realy want to see what happens with Daen and Darcia, I had thought that they were a sure thing but now I'm not. Also when or are Vas and Leoff going to get together you wicked authoress?
Loved the first chapter of this story, the duke is hot!
I realy want to see what happens with Daen and Darcia, I had thought that they were a sure thing but now I'm not. Also when or are Vas and Leoff going to get together you wicked authoress?
Loved the first chapter of this story, the duke is hot!