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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is great! I love the whole suspense/
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this!
Poor Dean. I love the internal angst...the wanting versus the need for independence.
"He scares me. Oh he terrifies me so!"
I wanted to cry!
And Timor needs to die. He's pissing me off.
I'm glad Dean and Vespa are getting on well enough.
The spirit out of body thing was a great twist, though I must say, the ending was a bit abrupt. All he does is take her into his mind and then it's over? She just gets off on that?
You, my dear are a tease and very, very mean. *pouts*
Please write more!
I hope Cira speaks soon.
To someone.
*excitedly waits for chappie 7!*
Forever your willing, devoted and adoring reader,
Nila
Poor Dean. I love the internal angst...the wanting versus the need for independence.
"He scares me. Oh he terrifies me so!"
I wanted to cry!
And Timor needs to die. He's pissing me off.
I'm glad Dean and Vespa are getting on well enough.
The spirit out of body thing was a great twist, though I must say, the ending was a bit abrupt. All he does is take her into his mind and then it's over? She just gets off on that?
You, my dear are a tease and very, very mean. *pouts*
Please write more!
I hope Cira speaks soon.
To someone.
*excitedly waits for chappie 7!*
Forever your willing, devoted and adoring reader,
Nila
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Daen is not hurt to badly. Poor darcia not been able to help! I realy want to know what Leoff has done update soon!!!!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Five star work again. Poor Vespa, I'm anticipating an truly hot make up secne however, prety please?!
I like how even some of your most evil villans are not actuly entirly evil and it is actuly more complex than that. Well exept Terent, i still hate him, the only question is now who will kill him?? Sienna or Leoff?
I like how even some of your most evil villans are not actuly entirly evil and it is actuly more complex than that. Well exept Terent, i still hate him, the only question is now who will kill him?? Sienna or Leoff?
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhh *glomps* yur absolutely amazing i read chaper 3 just yesturday oh man i was so happy when i saw that 4 was up ...u honestly have to consider getting this published!!! it be so cool haha ive tried doing some fanart but sadly im not that good *facepalm* but yeah cant wait for more im gonna be checking every day Ne!!!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yus!!! i was so glad to here that you had made sequel oh goddess u have no idea how much I love this story i want to make a fan site for u but i have no idea how to.. haha XD i cant wait till the mext chapter im dieing to see what happens next ahaahaha don't keep me waiting to long i may just go insane!! >,
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Daen is a fiesty one! I wonder what Lord Darcia is going to do about her letter, I hope he gets on his horse, gallops through the night and kisses the hell out of her!
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sometime's Leoff can realy anoy me, but I realy liked him in this chapter, it's nice to see that he has some emotions, and perhaps even some intrest in Vas. It's also nice to get in Vas's head a bit!
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2.
I was afraid that you were never going to put up another chapter and then i would never know what happens and then i would have had to cry.
I'm glad to see Vas developing as a character in his own right. I'm realy enjoying the tension between Leoff and Vas. I like how you have not done the obvious thing and made them lovers, but have made them friends insted. I'm still dying to know where you are going with them, will they just remain as freinds and Vas living with his unrequated love, or will something happen betwen the two of them? I laughed my ass off at the end of chapter. Leoff's reaction to Vas's teasing flirtation was helarious!
Oh, and hurry up and get Daen and Darcia back together! Keep up the good work.
I was afraid that you were never going to put up another chapter and then i would never know what happens and then i would have had to cry.
I'm glad to see Vas developing as a character in his own right. I'm realy enjoying the tension between Leoff and Vas. I like how you have not done the obvious thing and made them lovers, but have made them friends insted. I'm still dying to know where you are going with them, will they just remain as freinds and Vas living with his unrequated love, or will something happen betwen the two of them? I laughed my ass off at the end of chapter. Leoff's reaction to Vas's teasing flirtation was helarious!
Oh, and hurry up and get Daen and Darcia back together! Keep up the good work.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods, she doesent just do romance, but she does blisteringly good battle secnes as well, how do you do it, you will have to tell me!