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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Get me some ice! How steamy was that! I love Lord Darcia and daen they are such a passionate couple, all the arguments, all the frickin hot makeups! This chapter totaly deliverd.
I have asked before but can i steal darcia off you, prity please, just for a night ;)
I love how he can kill somone totaly mercylessly one second and then be all gentle with Daen the next. Please please please update soon!
I have asked before but can i steal darcia off you, prity please, just for a night ;)
I love how he can kill somone totaly mercylessly one second and then be all gentle with Daen the next. Please please please update soon!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 – 7
Oh my gods! This story is incredible. Just when I think it could not get more exiting it does. The more I read it the more I want to know. I really like how you covered the siege on both sides. I did not think I would ever like the imperial side, but I like that captain. Its really clever how you manage to make even the villains of your story not quite in the wrong.
So did Leoff kill those men, I think he did, but can he remember it or did Loke take him over again? You have to reveal the mystery soon or I will go mad with speculation!!!
I can’t believe you almost let Daen get killed! My heart was literally in my mouth when I read that. And I was getting more and more exited for her as lord Darcia grew ever closer.
Chapter 7 by the way was awesome. It was perhaps one of the hottest things that I have ever read! I had forgotten that Lord Darcia could create thunderstorms; he is such a cool character!
Oh my gods! This story is incredible. Just when I think it could not get more exiting it does. The more I read it the more I want to know. I really like how you covered the siege on both sides. I did not think I would ever like the imperial side, but I like that captain. Its really clever how you manage to make even the villains of your story not quite in the wrong.
So did Leoff kill those men, I think he did, but can he remember it or did Loke take him over again? You have to reveal the mystery soon or I will go mad with speculation!!!
I can’t believe you almost let Daen get killed! My heart was literally in my mouth when I read that. And I was getting more and more exited for her as lord Darcia grew ever closer.
Chapter 7 by the way was awesome. It was perhaps one of the hottest things that I have ever read! I had forgotten that Lord Darcia could create thunderstorms; he is such a cool character!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
The best chapter yet, all angst, romance, and erotica! I want my own Lord Darcia!
I love how Lord Darcia gets all bossy only to completely cave when Daen bats her lashes at him. Its so sweet! I really liked the inter play between Darcia and his demon sword,
“She is a fitting mate for you.”
“That is if I can convince her to be my mate.”
Bherith dismissed this. “You have taken her many times. You took her this morning.”
hilarious! As was Alwen getting carted off with.
At long last Daen admitted to him that she loved him!!! And my gods, I thought that after chapter 7 the sex scenes could not get better I was wrong. Update soon!!!
Love Karen
The best chapter yet, all angst, romance, and erotica! I want my own Lord Darcia!
I love how Lord Darcia gets all bossy only to completely cave when Daen bats her lashes at him. Its so sweet! I really liked the inter play between Darcia and his demon sword,
“She is a fitting mate for you.”
“That is if I can convince her to be my mate.”
Bherith dismissed this. “You have taken her many times. You took her this morning.”
hilarious! As was Alwen getting carted off with.
At long last Daen admitted to him that she loved him!!! And my gods, I thought that after chapter 7 the sex scenes could not get better I was wrong. Update soon!!!
Love Karen
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ACK! You stopped right when there could have been a nice sex scene again! *giggles*
Oh that was incredible!!!!!!!!!!!
Darcia was etible!!!!!!! Not like he's not all the time, but...mmm....right off the grill this time.
Amazing job!
*hugs tight* Please update soon!
And the part where Alwen is nearly falling off his horse made me giggle.
And awww! When Daen tried to leave him she almost made him cry! His voice cracked!
*pets Darcia*
And aaaaaaaaaaaa! Finally! Not only an "I love you" but "Marry me" and an "I will" too!!!!! OH how I adore you!
*spazes and dies from happiness*
Love always,
Nila
Oh that was incredible!!!!!!!!!!!
Darcia was etible!!!!!!! Not like he's not all the time, but...mmm....right off the grill this time.
Amazing job!
*hugs tight* Please update soon!
And the part where Alwen is nearly falling off his horse made me giggle.
And awww! When Daen tried to leave him she almost made him cry! His voice cracked!
*pets Darcia*
And aaaaaaaaaaaa! Finally! Not only an "I love you" but "Marry me" and an "I will" too!!!!! OH how I adore you!
*spazes and dies from happiness*
Love always,
Nila
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!
That was the hotest thing i have read on here, ever! Lord Darcia is officaly sex on legs! I want to steal him away!
It was worth the wait. But daen still has not said that she loves him!!!! You are such a tease! realy like how you can write a realy raunchy secne, but make it totaly romantic. Hopefuly you will treat Leoff and Vas in the same way. (Hint hint)
I'm jumping up and down waiting on the next chapter.
That was the hotest thing i have read on here, ever! Lord Darcia is officaly sex on legs! I want to steal him away!
It was worth the wait. But daen still has not said that she loves him!!!! You are such a tease! realy like how you can write a realy raunchy secne, but make it totaly romantic. Hopefuly you will treat Leoff and Vas in the same way. (Hint hint)
I'm jumping up and down waiting on the next chapter.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 & Chapter 4
I’m loving Darcia’s dark past. He is such a bad ass! The way you take your time developing your characters and revealing there past’s is simply magical, they feel like old friends. Alwen is so cute, he totally has a boy crush on darcia. I don’t blame him through the man is magnetic.
Not sure what to think of Sienna yet. I can sympathise with her but at the same time what goes around comes around.
I adore the love letter idea, it’s so romantic. (Big sigh,) When oh when is Daen just going to come out and say that she loves him the silly fool!
I used to really dislike Vespa but now I’m coming to like her. silly Veione for a womaniser you think he would be better at keeping her happy! This story keeps geting more and more exiting, its a grate blend of adventure and romance.
Again your characters are becoming like old friends, I just love how things just keep expanding to create a whole world. I just want to live in it (sobs!)
I’m off to read the rest. I have had no computer for a few weeks. Update soon!
I’m loving Darcia’s dark past. He is such a bad ass! The way you take your time developing your characters and revealing there past’s is simply magical, they feel like old friends. Alwen is so cute, he totally has a boy crush on darcia. I don’t blame him through the man is magnetic.
Not sure what to think of Sienna yet. I can sympathise with her but at the same time what goes around comes around.
I adore the love letter idea, it’s so romantic. (Big sigh,) When oh when is Daen just going to come out and say that she loves him the silly fool!
I used to really dislike Vespa but now I’m coming to like her. silly Veione for a womaniser you think he would be better at keeping her happy! This story keeps geting more and more exiting, its a grate blend of adventure and romance.
Again your characters are becoming like old friends, I just love how things just keep expanding to create a whole world. I just want to live in it (sobs!)
I’m off to read the rest. I have had no computer for a few weeks. Update soon!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!
This was...was...well...there are only four words for this chapter.
That. Was. Freaking. Hot.
The siege was cool; but the meeting...aahh! *dies*
But oi! What happened to that excerpt you showed me? The "bring me low" one? Where'd that go? *pouts*
And damn it! When will these nutters say the damn words?! I. Love. YOu. C'mon Di, don't leave me hangin'!
LOL
Just kidding.
I hope you update very, very very very very very very very to the millionth degree soon.
Love Nila
*hugs tight*
This was...was...well...there are only four words for this chapter.
That. Was. Freaking. Hot.
The siege was cool; but the meeting...aahh! *dies*
But oi! What happened to that excerpt you showed me? The "bring me low" one? Where'd that go? *pouts*
And damn it! When will these nutters say the damn words?! I. Love. YOu. C'mon Di, don't leave me hangin'!
LOL
Just kidding.
I hope you update very, very very very very very very very to the millionth degree soon.
Love Nila
*hugs tight*
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should have seen me when he was going to her; my heart was beating crazily and everything. I was feeling their excitement and it was amazing. Incredible writing there.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yey!! 5 XD and i see that 6 is up as well happy day X3
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing as always X3 I look forward to the next one till then with love from your newest reader
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