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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like, I hope you have plans to finish this story as well. :D
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Daen's preeeeeeeeegnaaaaaaant! God, I so missed her! And Darcia together. Loving, bickering, holding one another. The dawn star will rise here. Maybe that has something to do with her, as that is her namesake. Oh, I cannot wait! Please update soon!!!!!!!
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods, I'm so glad that i have found this story! Normaly i get irked by typos, but your story is just to good not to read. I read the first chapter and then had to go back and read the first in your series even though it has taken me three weeks to get through it all! The story just draws you in stright away. Your style has definatly improved as you have gone along, this second work is simply amazing!
I love the caracters, i love the love storys, and the bit where Daen was runing for her life was so exiting i was practicly jumping up and down in my seat!
Keep up the good work Annie
I love the caracters, i love the love storys, and the bit where Daen was runing for her life was so exiting i was practicly jumping up and down in my seat!
Keep up the good work Annie
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapter 12 - 13
Ok i'm very exited by the recent developments. I love storys where there is politacal intreege and yours just keeps geting deeper, it's like lost only not so confusing! Darcia and Daen are geting married, yay! (i had a little girly moment)
I'm glad Leoff's back in the story, but when are he and Vas going to get it on!
Ok i'm very exited by the recent developments. I love storys where there is politacal intreege and yours just keeps geting deeper, it's like lost only not so confusing! Darcia and Daen are geting married, yay! (i had a little girly moment)
I'm glad Leoff's back in the story, but when are he and Vas going to get it on!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God! I am so so so so sorry it took me soooooooooooo long to review this!!!!!!! *hugs tight*
Okay, so this was interesting. It seems to be a filler/set up chapter; setting up things to come. And the things to come don't seem good. Keep up the awesome work! I want an update soon! *stomps feet* You hear me, Di? Soooooooooooooon!
*giggles and hugs* Love ya, girli.
Okay, so this was interesting. It seems to be a filler/set up chapter; setting up things to come. And the things to come don't seem good. Keep up the awesome work! I want an update soon! *stomps feet* You hear me, Di? Soooooooooooooon!
*giggles and hugs* Love ya, girli.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay good chapter as usual! I hope Koto isn't going to do anything too stupid.. it seems he is questioning things. Very bad thing to do with those types of religions! ^.^
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First, this is still Luinil_Telcontar; just changed my penname.
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! *dances around*
Great chapter. I felt it more a setup than anything; a breath before a plunge. Arlen seems to be coming to his senses, Goran needs to die, Timor I feel kinda for but not really since he's a bloody fucking sodding buggering bastard of a traitor.
Poor Vespa. She's so sad. *hugs her tight*
Poor Daen. She's going to miss her Andras so much. I think maybe you should have a dream smut scene that's not really a dream but...I dunno; a mind touch or somethin'? *grins*
I can't wait for more!!!!
And Shards should be updated soon.
Kanashii
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! *dances around*
Great chapter. I felt it more a setup than anything; a breath before a plunge. Arlen seems to be coming to his senses, Goran needs to die, Timor I feel kinda for but not really since he's a bloody fucking sodding buggering bastard of a traitor.
Poor Vespa. She's so sad. *hugs her tight*
Poor Daen. She's going to miss her Andras so much. I think maybe you should have a dream smut scene that's not really a dream but...I dunno; a mind touch or somethin'? *grins*
I can't wait for more!!!!
And Shards should be updated soon.
Kanashii
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You finaly updated! Im so glad. I realy enjoyed reading the battle secnes, they are epic! I hadent realised how much I missed this story so i reread all of it. It's just amazing how vivid it all is. The plot is so exiting and just when you think it's definatly going one way you do something even better with it.
Poor Vespa and Veione, i like how you have been sensitive to all the sides of the story. Veione needs to go back to her right now! lol. I'm warming to Ahrlan, and wonder what do you mean to do with him?
Poor Vespa and Veione, i like how you have been sensitive to all the sides of the story. Veione needs to go back to her right now! lol. I'm warming to Ahrlan, and wonder what do you mean to do with him?
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapters 5 and 6. I know that I hadn't finished reading all the chapters, but so much has happened that I can't help it.
First - Leoff, Vas, and Blake were able to get in AND travel with the troops for a while. How bad is their security? I felt so bad for Vas for getting hurt and we don't know what Leoff did to them. I don't know if I hope he killed them or not? But I do hope he didn't kill them just because he lost control of the demon sword. Also, are these the same group of soldiers that tried to kidnap Darcia's mother. If they were, Leoff might have bumped into Daen again, but I guess not. They would not want to be so close to Darcia lands for fear of capture.
Second - DAEN!!! She is absolutely wonderful here! Starting with how she handled the men and their superstition about the flowers - to - figuring out what the Imperial troops were really going after - to - getting everything together to go save Darcia's mother. Also, I really have a bad feeling about Timor, he knew Darcia's mother was still alive and tried to dismiss Daen's theroies about her being in danger. He didn't want to send any help to Darcia's mother and there is still an unknown traitor around. I hope I'm wrong, that the traitor is not someone so close to Darcia's inner circle of trusted men, but I don't think I'm am.
The rest of chapter 5 felt like a rollercoaster ride. Your description covering the ride getting Darcia's mother to the reace to Rhayd is amazing. The run for Rhayd in the rain, the carriage getting stuck, the attack from the Imperial troops, Daen fighting with the warriors, Daen killing someone. SHE GETTING WOUNDED AND ALMOST DYING, HER CALLING OUT TO DARCIA, HE CALLING BACK TO HER - IT WAS ALL SO SUSPENSEFUL AND WONDERFULL. This was the best chapter (so far) of this entire story. I LOVED IT!!!
In chapter 6, when the Imperial troops were attacking Rhayd - I like that the 2 main people in charge are Vespa and Daen. However, I don't think she should have kept Darica out of her mind so long. She should have been screaming for him to sent freaking help NOW! Of course, Daen shows how much her power have grown by using lighting to destroy the Imperial cannon, awesome.
All of this was just great, I can't wait to get to chapter 7 and 8. But since I only have 2 chapters left I have to ask, plead, and beg that you up date soon.
First - Leoff, Vas, and Blake were able to get in AND travel with the troops for a while. How bad is their security? I felt so bad for Vas for getting hurt and we don't know what Leoff did to them. I don't know if I hope he killed them or not? But I do hope he didn't kill them just because he lost control of the demon sword. Also, are these the same group of soldiers that tried to kidnap Darcia's mother. If they were, Leoff might have bumped into Daen again, but I guess not. They would not want to be so close to Darcia lands for fear of capture.
Second - DAEN!!! She is absolutely wonderful here! Starting with how she handled the men and their superstition about the flowers - to - figuring out what the Imperial troops were really going after - to - getting everything together to go save Darcia's mother. Also, I really have a bad feeling about Timor, he knew Darcia's mother was still alive and tried to dismiss Daen's theroies about her being in danger. He didn't want to send any help to Darcia's mother and there is still an unknown traitor around. I hope I'm wrong, that the traitor is not someone so close to Darcia's inner circle of trusted men, but I don't think I'm am.
The rest of chapter 5 felt like a rollercoaster ride. Your description covering the ride getting Darcia's mother to the reace to Rhayd is amazing. The run for Rhayd in the rain, the carriage getting stuck, the attack from the Imperial troops, Daen fighting with the warriors, Daen killing someone. SHE GETTING WOUNDED AND ALMOST DYING, HER CALLING OUT TO DARCIA, HE CALLING BACK TO HER - IT WAS ALL SO SUSPENSEFUL AND WONDERFULL. This was the best chapter (so far) of this entire story. I LOVED IT!!!
In chapter 6, when the Imperial troops were attacking Rhayd - I like that the 2 main people in charge are Vespa and Daen. However, I don't think she should have kept Darica out of her mind so long. She should have been screaming for him to sent freaking help NOW! Of course, Daen shows how much her power have grown by using lighting to destroy the Imperial cannon, awesome.
All of this was just great, I can't wait to get to chapter 7 and 8. But since I only have 2 chapters left I have to ask, plead, and beg that you up date soon.
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapters 2 - 4. I know I haven't reviewed for a while, sometimes life gets out of control. Beleive me I have completely missed this story. I was so happy to be able to start reading again. Right now I just finished chapter 4, I figured it was a good time to give a review.
First - Leoff, Vas, and Blake are doing OK, still kinda on the run and Leoff is still trying to get control over the sword. Glad to see they figured out that something was very wrong with the way this war just happened. I am very worried about them sneeking into the army camp, to many things can go wrong, but I guess I'll find out very soon.
Second - I thought Lord Edouard's plan was to kill the Emperor, but it seems his only want was to get back at Darcia. Now, Terent's idea is to not just kill the Emperor, but replace him. I think it a little bold for him. Glad Terent still can't keep his mouth shut, bragging to Sienna and Salford. Hope it bites him in the ass.
Third - Vespa and Veione. I woundered if Veione would treat her differently, but in this case lucky he showed up. I think Vesap is a great warrior, but I think she really would have been killed if Veione didn't help. Of course, I don't think he should have tried to kiss her, but it was an honest mistake. Oh, and Vespa has a demon sword too? I thought it was really rare to have one, but it seems everyone has got one.
Finally, Darcia and Daen. What can I say except - I can't wait till the wedding (please let there be a wedding). However, I love the way everyone is now sucking up to Dean. My favorite part is the gardener calling her a real Lady, once she said she liked butterflies.
Your writing is great as ever and the best part is I already know I still have chapters 5-8 to read. See you soon.
First - Leoff, Vas, and Blake are doing OK, still kinda on the run and Leoff is still trying to get control over the sword. Glad to see they figured out that something was very wrong with the way this war just happened. I am very worried about them sneeking into the army camp, to many things can go wrong, but I guess I'll find out very soon.
Second - I thought Lord Edouard's plan was to kill the Emperor, but it seems his only want was to get back at Darcia. Now, Terent's idea is to not just kill the Emperor, but replace him. I think it a little bold for him. Glad Terent still can't keep his mouth shut, bragging to Sienna and Salford. Hope it bites him in the ass.
Third - Vespa and Veione. I woundered if Veione would treat her differently, but in this case lucky he showed up. I think Vesap is a great warrior, but I think she really would have been killed if Veione didn't help. Of course, I don't think he should have tried to kiss her, but it was an honest mistake. Oh, and Vespa has a demon sword too? I thought it was really rare to have one, but it seems everyone has got one.
Finally, Darcia and Daen. What can I say except - I can't wait till the wedding (please let there be a wedding). However, I love the way everyone is now sucking up to Dean. My favorite part is the gardener calling her a real Lady, once she said she liked butterflies.
Your writing is great as ever and the best part is I already know I still have chapters 5-8 to read. See you soon.