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Just wondering if you planned on finishing this story or Caught In His Gravity/Don't Abduct Me I'm Welsh? You're one of the best authors on here.

Hi @Catz33 I fully plan on finishing off both in the next 6 months. I'm really glad that you have enjoyed both stories. I'm doing a huge re-edit on Don't abduct me i'm welsh to turn it into a series with better legs.

This is a lovely story that has great character depth.
you should really think of continuing this as a novel.
The plot is very well-thought-out and the length of each entry is perfect for a novella
Hope you end up finishing this story

Please finish this story, I just discovered it and I find your writing to be incredibly compelling. Also, I have to say I will be more than a little disappointed if Leoff and Vas don't end up together.

I wanted to tell you that I just returned to this story after some time and its even better than I remember, I hope you continue with it!!

Oh wow. This is getting really, really dark. I love the emotion here. The despair, the fear, the anger... I have to say, I can't blame Andras for being angry with her. It's wrong that she's using their trust as a weapon. If she doesn't like it, then she should leave. If she can't stomach it, then she shouldn't be there. He's trying to save them all. Doesn't she get this? Guh, Daen!

Then again, by the same token, those WERE her people, and there will always be a part of her that loves them, so I can understand. She doesn't want to see him fall to the darkness lurking inside him. She needs to keep him with her... in what light she can find.

The last line was filled with such emotion, even if it was only two words. "I'm scared." That, coupled with her leaning in and the fury she was trying to suppress really brought those words home.

This tale is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next. You're incredible and I absolutely adore you, your story, and all your characters that make it such a thrilling read.

I have read the prequel to this story, and as I read this one I become more involved. I thoroughly enjoy these stories, and offer my services proof-reading for grammatical and spelling errors if you have the need for something of that sort. :)
Please continue to update

Cool chapter. I reackon Dean is pregnant. :D

Yes a update. I can't believe I missed this before. Fantastic your not going to leave this story unfinished.

So Dean is a Princess, cool. :D

I forgot to ask. How old is Daen and Darcia? I don't know if you mentioned it before in the stories, I might of missed it.