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update update! lol im addicted :D

i love the title, and the summary, and the scenario, and the witty hi there =p, and the dialogue...lol on the car...""As kinky as it would be to brag that my first time with you was in plain view of the general public, I'd rather some one's granny intrude apon it.""...a typo near the comma part, "i'd rather not?"...sorry for the pickiness...and omg i hate that u stopped but it was quite brilliant in a way, kinda builds up suspense and kind of nice they didn't have sex right away...thank goodness there's chapter 2...can't wait, and wow nice bday present lol a

Cute Story, Can't wait to read more. Update Soon?

I LOVE your story! My car is a 1994 Bonneville it was my dad's and he named it what you ask? BONNIE! lol. I love that you picked that name. Please update soon!

hey i like this story so far
hope u update soon