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by CherryStarburst

person Saminada
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! This was the best of the three oneshots!!! XDD

I like the fact that they knew each other when they were younger! ^^

Even if it didn't worked out for them then, I'm glad that they could still work it out! *hugs them*

They make a really sweet couple! LOL And one thing that I would like to see is a proper meeting between Mark and James' son! ^_^

Maybe they could got out somewhere and Mark could spoiled the kid a bit! *grins*

Anyways, I really liked this oneshot! Thanks alot! *hugsX3*

schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I never expected the back story. It was plausable though if someone had affected your life so recently, ie college, you would think you would remember their face. I thought it was cute the way he was treated like a girl and wanted to rebel. "restaurant"
person Koira
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. The reason your Open Office doesn't recognize the word "restraunt" is because it is spelt restaurant. òÓ
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've enjoyed this whole thing. It was a sweet little love story. I like how they met up again years later. It was a different spin on a somewhat cliched plot. I have no complaints. It was simple and to the point. But most of all it was delightful. =)
person ^^
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really liked ^^ if anything, i'd be curious about a formal introduction between isaac and mark ;)
person Aleks
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, great...etc.
more childhood memories next time....they sounded sweet...
if you ever write again about these two: a nice living together with son scene would be nice... :)
person js
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just writing to let you know I enjoyed the trilogy and also that you misspelled "restaurant" in your author's note at the top of the page. :)