rate_review Reviews

This chapter was so cute. I can't wait to see more of this. I hope the next chapter's longer.

you do realize that the possibilty of a male person caring for any kind of eggs is almost nonexistent.
gay or not males are mostly p.i.g.s
*chuckles*
there goes a perfect healthy generalization.
now we're left with exceptions from the rule and such.
meaning there is there is that 0.1% of male population who care about birds.
so your story isn't just fiction.
it holds some truth in it.

anyway i like kindu(the name reminds me of a charachter in some book i read-cool choice)
his long silver hair reminds me of yaten from sailor moon( i realy loved that anime even though i despise
'girly' behaviour;it was cool,specialy stars arc-yaten as a male person suffering from pms btw.that also happens to males in real life)
i hope kindu wont be to shy to apply force on kemian which name i don't like but is doing a decent job so far on that' there are males who don't want other males thing'
kemian,kemian.
you do know that's a lie.
there are a lots of hypocrites today among males.
the truth is you feel soemthing twards the person(as in gender irrelevant)
or you need to quench your lust(again gender irrelevant)
so for god's sake who's buying 'i'm straight' anyomore?
my mouth will fall of by repeating this.
jeseus.
why don't they all accept they're gay and get it over with.
i don't mind.
see,more gay males, more peace and quiet for me.
even though it's fun ppl trying to manhandle me and failing over and over
it gets kind of boring.
i'd rather watch two males trying to manhandle one another.
*big smile*
it makes my day every time i see such a thing.
i hope i'll see it today too.

Alright, let's make you happy then.
Cute story, nice characters, will read on.
Though I suppose the bird mother won't ever come back to her nest because she can detect the humans' scent there and will abandon "the miracle" leaving it to die. That's just cynical me, though.
=)

awesomely done! I cant wait for the next chapter, Kemian and Kindu= perfection.

Yay! youve finally posted chapter 2! Im still liking Kemian and Kindu, and the Dante guy is still...well...i dunno.

Great chapter, I cant wait for chapter 3, please, please, please write it soon?

I would love you forever!

Holy....crap....need.....more.....now. Please update soon, I am in love with this story. *drools*

I really enjoyed the chapter and would love to see more of the story.

I love it so far. Kindu is adorable. They have interesting names! Can't wait to see more .

Oh, I'm going to enjoy reading the rest this story as well. I often had to laugh at Kemian's predicament. It's funnily written. And it is in fact a huge compliment. ^_^

This is such an awesome story! Please write more? Please?

I love the Kindu guy. And the Kemian guy is pretty cool to. Dante...I dunno I guess ill see what happens soon.

Anyways, Congrats on your first post, I think ill have to keep an eye out for further stuff from you.