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August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks:) I enjoyed reading this.
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story was just... amazing, I love your characters and you can really feel the love (excuse the hippy phrase) even, especially rather, during the punishment scene.
This is one of my favorite stories, like, ever. :D
Great job.
~taedium
This is one of my favorite stories, like, ever. :D
Great job.
~taedium
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done!
I very much enjoy the characters of this story.
I very much enjoy the characters of this story.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! I wish you would do more with these characters. I would love to see more of them!!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah; thought I should review this before I forget. I read it late last night(or should I say early this morning--4:00) and I couldn't review because the site was being updated and I had to go to bed. So now I'll comment once again on how I love your stories and the way you write makes me think you should be a professional. This was great, I can totally feel for you characters cuz you bring them alive and it makes me yearn to be able to do the same with mine. Anyways, keep up the great work.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how you did it, but in just one chapter, my heart broke, repaired itself and then soared! 8D I felt so bad for Raz when he was being sent off, I really did. And even if when he came back, he got a harsh treatment, I could feel the love!
Your writing is so elegant and your descriptions are nearly flawless. @_@ I look up to your writing and I'm definitely going to check out more from you!
Your writing is so elegant and your descriptions are nearly flawless. @_@ I look up to your writing and I'm definitely going to check out more from you!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done :)
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely portayed characters! It was really hot! Good job!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I love you choice of names for the characters and the punishment scene was especially hot and yummy. Thank you for sharing this!