rate_review Reviews

Yes they should meet again!!!!!!!!!

A really good start for more! :)

Nice and simple - I like =p
Criticism? Well, the situation is not exactly believable. But hey, it is fiction. It doesn't matter. The story is cool and there is no way you could make it believable in itself. And I don't see anything wrong with the writing.
Good job for a first :)

good job^^ for your first PWP! There were only two problems I could spot: first, the actual porn. I liked it, but it went a bit too fast for me. Second, the recovery: again, too fast. Other than that, it was a really good one-shot, and I'll definitely be looking up more of your work^^

~Minayo :3

more please

its going so good, many questions still unanswered

i like ur writing style...very..um....casual??? (in a good way, lol i suck)

another chapter would be great

I'm curious to see where this could go. Please continue!

This have better not be a oneshot story. I absolutly loved it. Please continue and write more. I LOVED IT.

Well I liked it. But then again, I have one of those really weird obsessions with rich older guys. Ah haha. Not saying that this made it an excuse for being a good one shot. I liked it. Liked it lots. I was in such a mood for reading something like this. (which probably sounds wrong.) Either way, I'd say go for it if you'd feel like continuing this!

I actually would have found this one shot even more of a thrill if Mark turned out to be the man that was going to the interview and his reasons for being in the elevator at that time was because he was, maybe, just leaving. In any case, the ending for this oneshot was great as well.

xsooooooooooooooo goodx

very cute i liked it alot please continue.