rate_review Reviews

Whatever you did to 'fix' it - not that she could imagine that there would have ever been anything wrong with it...well, wow.

That was hot.

You ought to give this a second chapter.

Definitely.

I liked it very much. I was expecting that Mark was in fact the interviewer John was there to meet and that was why he knew so much about him. But that would have been too easy, wouldn't it? Anyway, I enjoyed it a lot.

I don't recall any particularly glaring errors, so, good job!

That was a yummy little one-shot. ^w^

Now, I'm off to read the second course! XD

I liked this. I thought the hotness was just right. I liked the mystery surrounding James. I also noticed your English influences in referring to government housing. We don't call them that in the States. I believe they would be referred to as the Projects. Overall great for a one shot I would like to see more of James and Mark.

“Some bloke's here with me... doesn't look like a murderer...”

That, my dear, is the best line in the history of lines! *glomps* I love it. Too bad he didn't get the job, but at least he gets money from the gold digging ex-wife. It's all good! Now all you have to do is pretend that this isn't a one-shot and write more! =]

oh, that was cute. nice and sexy and cute

You definately need to continue!

Wow this was really good. Your style of writing really drew me into the story and I'd love to read more, but it works well as a one shot too.

Heh, I was so sure that Mark was going to end up being the guy that was meant to interview him.

Loved the story. You write beautifully, and I can't wait to read more from you. I'm going to go see if you've written anything else on here as soon as I get done reviewing.

I think there should have been a little more transition between casual conversation and hot passionate sex, though. It just seemed a little bit too sudden, and usually talking about a kid would suggest the lack of being interested in men. There are a lot of gay men with children, yes, but it was quite a chance to take on Mark's part to just jump him like that, especially in his own place of work.

I would love for you to continue this!
I would love to find out where Mark stands in the company!
It seemed so random, meeting a guy in a lift, but I really enjoyed reading it!
In a short amount of time you managed to give a good background on James, without
going into a load of detail- if that makes sense! I feel sorry for James already.
I hope you do continue this!

xReikex