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for Ashar

by kiramorningstar

person nyge98
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading your story and I must say i love it. it is truly fascinating. i hope Ashar is able to change Varador for the better. I can't wait till the next chapter. Please keep writing
person knave
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice story and written well.

you have to update soon please
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Kira,
Very interesting start :) Will be reading this fic for sure. Good set-up for a story. I like the fact that Lord Varador has not fallen immediately in love with Ashar and only has bad intentions. Benthem character is interesting as well.