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for Beyond Temptation

by KristinaDalton

schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a lot of work, but also a lot of fun having two male leads. Especially ones so different.

Thanks for letting me know you're reading, and your thoughts, ladies.

K
person dschinny
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brom stays course but it seems he's in the doldrums since 5-10 chapters. The alpha male he entered would probably get the engine going ;)
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Reike, hope you're ready for another reveal about Brom. His secret's a two parter.

K
person Reike
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was so hot!
Brom and Malec are not so different in the bedroom area are they?
But I really think Avery should choose between the two, I know
she's not had much experience and that but it really seems like she's
just stringing them along, I feel sorry for the two guys!
I loved that chapter..and I decided who I think she should be with..
Brom all the way!
Reike x
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>_> I have this odd like for Malec more... >_> I don't care too much for Brom... Even though he is the 'nicer?' of the two... *sigh* every time you make Avery do more with Brom I want to smack her. xD Silly I know... I guess I like the mysterious dark one more. xD Keep it up! You're writing great... I was cheering for Malec at the end of Chapter 16 and I will be for a while to come...
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heheheheh.... Bless your kind heart, Reike. I am far crueler than you. ;)

They are both free men. If they don't like it, they can bounce.

I think it's her prerogative to have them both if one doesn't throw in the towel. So long as they both stay, they both agree to sharing her. I say let the girl work!

K
person Slinki
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, and Sinclair should be an interesting addition. By the way, if you're looking for more reviews, you should probably change the setting on the review button so that the reader doesn't need to be logged in in order to review.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"that flaming friend of yours who favors me" okay that cracked me up. :)

I'm so torn now. it seems Malec is starting to get genuine feelings for her and not just lust.

I think she's gonna take the final plunge with Brom. she seems the most comfortable with him, and if I remember correctly she's tried everything with him first... so naturally...

very hot, very drama filled, loved it!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BH, my friend!

Oooh, I do love yanking you back and forth! Kisses!

This is a tough, if fun write.

KD
person dschinny
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I keep wondering what an grown up, experienced guy like Brom finds in an indecisive chick like Arvey... I mean, for Malec it’s okay to be a little crazy considering he's a vamp and immortals have unlimited time, but a professional like Brom? If he has a plan, it’s high time to put it into motion. Because if it's all about virginity, I'm not buying it...