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for Beyond Temptation

by KristinaDalton

person Slinki
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just to let you know how ansy I will be until you update this. :P
person M M
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't say that I didn't see that coming. Now the question is will they add a fourth to their little group or keep it a "happy" threesome? Should be interesting either way.
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Working hard today.

KD
person Reike
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woaahhh, that was kinda hot!
I think I would have fainted too...good on you Avery haha!
I like Brom, he still has his sense of humour.
I hope they guys can get along coz I like them both as much now!
I don't know how I read your stories either, being squeamish..ugh I think
you managed to make me feel ill in every one of your stories especially in
"Taken", but I'm a glutton for punishment and I love your stories haha!
Thanks for the update =)
Reike x
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BH, GS, Reike,

You all know by now in my novels anything goes. I love to push the envelope, get readers outside their comfort zones, then keep them happy there.

KD
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, surprises and hotness!
so your not gonna make her choose, and I'm guessing since the guys are attracted to each other it's gonna be a unconventional relationship like in "Unleashed".... ah whatever, as much as I try I can't ever predict your writing.
loved it. ;)
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much. I really don't mind someone telling what they found wrong or disliked, then telling me to take my crap and bugger off. It's the rubbernecking that makes no sense. Life's too short to waste time reading something you don't like.

Anyway, per your comments, you have made my day. I appreciate the feedback and it makes me want to write!

Wrote half the chapter last night. Husband was busy with our daughter, so I almost had to go off and get real friendly with myself it was so warm. Heheheheheheh ...

Should post this evening.

KD

Hopefully you ladies will like it.
person yukimayu
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, saw the vampire coming, but not the genetically altered guy. Well Done.
person a
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM

:(
person Michelle
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was hooked on EVERY word! So good!
Please update soon!