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I am going to give this a few more chapters. Then, if it's just a few people reviewing, I will stop posting and go to direct email. It's too much hassle to reformat and slap it up if only a few very conscientious readers review.

Thanks to those who do!

ooh, creepy! So what's next? She wouldn't let Brom touch her but she'd let creepy rich guy touch her? This girl needs to get her priorities straight!

damn Brom's a trooper!
you were right Malec is slowly starting to grow on me, but I'm still rooting for Brom.
and that little thing with Rupert was too cute. :)

Hmmmm.....where to go, where to go? I suppose things shall get a bit steamy now? By the way, I was thinking (dangerous thing, I know), does Brom make that Gaza Strip error because he's not who he says he is? Sometimes my imagination goes a bit too far and needs to be pulled back. Still enjoying the story very much!

ah! I don't know whether to feel sorry for Avery or
just plain jealous!
Malec seems scary though, you get those scary vibes off him...
but then I'm kind of getting those vibes off Brom too.
ugh the suspense, I have a feeling one of them is hiding something?
I could be wrong though =S
Loved it!
Reike x

How'd I miss this story? *hits head*
Anyway, I'm loving this!
Brom makes me laugh!

“Profession kidnappers and terrorists don’t often send an email. One has to adapt.”

That has to be one of my favourite lines haha. His wit seems really casual on him!
Avery, bless her and her inability to have snappy comebacks, oh how I bet she wishes she could think of them when
faced with Brom!

Avery caught herself staring at the way the muscles of his body pushed at his elegant clothes.

“Would you like to see?” he queried.

Two way meaning? That bit made me laugh out loud, I like Avery's mind!
Bless Brom, he seems really sweet though!
But Malec seems all mysterious and sexy too.
Oh Avery, who you gonna choose?
Loving this story too!
Reike x

REIKE!!!

My favey!

You're here now, so enjoy!

Okay,I must admit somewhat sheepishly,that I,Holly, a.k.a tepiglet*raises hand*,
have been reading Beyond Temptation(and your other stories as well),since its inception,
and have yet to review and/or comment, until now.
I chalk it up to my inherent laziness,but that's no excuse.
You are an excellent writer,and I want to thank you wholeheartedly for gifting us with
your wonderful,entertaining,and enthralling stories.
I know that writers crave/need/deserve/thrive on feedback,and rightly so.
I usually read fanfics over at fanfiction.net,and am only occasionally on this site,and only
read the more 'mainstream' male/female romance stories with actual workable,plausible plots,i.e not the more...er...unusual 'out there'kinky stories for people with more 'extreme' sexual proclivities,if you get my drift.
For example,I'm a big fan of the 'Dark Hunter' books by Sherrilyn Kennyon(sp?),to give you an idea of what I'm into.
I'll give you actual feedback,as it pertains to your story next time.
I just wanted you to know that your work IS appreciated,and that we,the readers,are very fortunate to have a writer of your high caliber,pre-releasing/sharing her work here.
Until next time,
Holly

Holly, thank you so much for letting me hear from you. The checks are great from the retail, but I really love talking to readers. I teach and do clinics, but most people I encounter read me after, not before. So, it's still all quiet on the western front.

I appreciate the feedback and kind words.

KD

Please, ma'am, I want some more.........