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for Beyond Temptation

by KristinaDalton

schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bet the staff had to mop the testosterone off the floor after that meeting.

Heheheh .... I love big alpha males. When I wrote their conversation, I kept hearing my husband's voice.

KD
person Reike
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoah!
Look at them fight it out!
Down boys!
You could cut the tension with a knife!
Loved it muchly!
Reike x
person Meep9191
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! (and Brom) keep it up!
person Reike
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! whoop!
Woah temper Malec, maybe if you weren't such an
overpowering creepy mc creep creep then Avery would have stayed
with you, yes!
Brom was really sweet in this chapter, ugh I wanna know what secret
he's hiding! Is he a vampire hunter? Or something along those lines..
oh the suspense! haha!
I see a little resemblance with the Garret men in Brom, he reminds me
a bit of James =)
Loved it!
Reike x
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heheheh... suspense, yes.

I actually used the last name Ramsey in Unleashed. Remember the captain Roth bought those first cheetah kits from? Captain Ramsey.

Almost done with next chappy right now.

Juicy more!
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter up!

Oooohhh, scary Malec, ahoy!

Tender, Malec, too.

Strap in, ladies!

Getting back to work while the juices flow.
person Reike
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waoh 2 updates in a row!
Lucky!
Woah Malec's a bit of a woman with his polar mood swings duuudde!
I kinda like him though, oh I don't know who she should choose!
One minute Brom will get some "go for it" points and then Malec will
get some..who to choose eh?
Brom seems royally pissed!
This is really great!
Reike x
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! thanks for spoiling us with 2 chapters.
geez way to act like a temperamental child Malec.
YES! finally Brom Got some lovin!
I think Malec is really starting to fall for her, but i don't think he can give her what she really wants and needs in the long run.
okay Malec has officially entered psycho bitch mode with the whole out in the open kidnapping stunt.
you go Brom with your stealthy ass. :)
one of them is going to die.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think she had it in her to steal a car.
and you are so mean. here I am letting the hope for Brom go, and then THAT happened... sooo wasn't expecting it.
very hot.
can't wait for more. ;)
person Reike
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo you updated super fast!
I love you for that!
Brom, Brom, Brom stop stalking the girl and giving her a heart attack,
honestly that's not the way! haha!
Avery reallllyy needs to choose between the two, haha it seems like whenever
she's around Brom she has no control...hmmmm I knew he was hiding something!
I think I have a slight idea what it is!
Malec I think has been taking a few pages from Brom's book "How to freak a girl out",
that horse woooaaahhh and in general he is kinda creepy!
Loved the update!
Reike x