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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I'd just like to start by saying that I first read the first half of this story with a friend of mine two years ago. I'd been searching for it ever since, and it just occurred to me yesterday that asking about it on the forums would lead me back to this wonderful and captivating story! I've no regrets, and I'm happy to finally be able to give a review that I've been itching to give. First and foremost, I absolutely love the characters! The word choice and enticing details make for a simply enthralling story, and kept me entranced as I read all the available chapters. I've been looking for information on you and your success as a writer -- to see if I could possibly catch a glimpse of a continuation of this story -- and I've come up short. I would absolutely love to continue reading this work! I feel as if I'm longing for more chapters just as much as (if not more than) Avery longing to have both Brom and Malec for herself. Also, if I'm not mistaken, I believe one of your earlier A/N's explained that a reviewer who's dedicated would be able to read more of the story. I know this is my first review and all that, but, I would really appreciate it if I could see the rest of it? I guess I can understand if that's just not possible, but it'd be nothing short of disappointing if I can't.
Sincerely yours,
~Iz
I'd just like to start by saying that I first read the first half of this story with a friend of mine two years ago. I'd been searching for it ever since, and it just occurred to me yesterday that asking about it on the forums would lead me back to this wonderful and captivating story! I've no regrets, and I'm happy to finally be able to give a review that I've been itching to give. First and foremost, I absolutely love the characters! The word choice and enticing details make for a simply enthralling story, and kept me entranced as I read all the available chapters. I've been looking for information on you and your success as a writer -- to see if I could possibly catch a glimpse of a continuation of this story -- and I've come up short. I would absolutely love to continue reading this work! I feel as if I'm longing for more chapters just as much as (if not more than) Avery longing to have both Brom and Malec for herself. Also, if I'm not mistaken, I believe one of your earlier A/N's explained that a reviewer who's dedicated would be able to read more of the story. I know this is my first review and all that, but, I would really appreciate it if I could see the rest of it? I guess I can understand if that's just not possible, but it'd be nothing short of disappointing if I can't.
Sincerely yours,
~Iz
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November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story, it is such a shame that it has been so long since was updated. I really hope you come back to this soon, I really want to continue reading!
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I liked this quite a lot, although the place in which you chose to stop was rather inopportune. The characterization was good and the grammer clear and easily understandable. The only minor (and addmittedly pedantic) things I noted were you once used passed instead of past and the whole mary's room concept causEd me momentary. Pause due to the whole feminine possessive thing, maybe just use a room number or some form of descriptive to name it?
Thanks for posting this.
I liked this quite a lot, although the place in which you chose to stop was rather inopportune. The characterization was good and the grammer clear and easily understandable. The only minor (and addmittedly pedantic) things I noted were you once used passed instead of past and the whole mary's room concept causEd me momentary. Pause due to the whole feminine possessive thing, maybe just use a room number or some form of descriptive to name it?
Thanks for posting this.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, i just tried to update and didn't look like it worked so here we go again :) An absolute pleasure to read, so well written and I love where you seem to be going with the plot line. Please update when you can, would be much appreciated :)
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Laur, and yes I've read it twice as well... wish you'd update :)
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with your stories. It is unbelievable the talent you have. Please keep writing more. I am very curious as to how this story is going to end.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude...Update this story! AHHHHH! I have read it twice already. Geez. lol;
Only thing that is a little annoying about your story is that she doesn't give in. I know that her character is scared and such but I don't think realistically (well as realistic as this can get) if you had two hunks trying to jump your bones and you digged both that you would hold out for so long. It gets boring after awhile. And then on top of that you leave us hanging when it looks like she is finally going to get some. UGH of the inhumanity. LOL. Keep up the good work.
Only thing that is a little annoying about your story is that she doesn't give in. I know that her character is scared and such but I don't think realistically (well as realistic as this can get) if you had two hunks trying to jump your bones and you digged both that you would hold out for so long. It gets boring after awhile. And then on top of that you leave us hanging when it looks like she is finally going to get some. UGH of the inhumanity. LOL. Keep up the good work.
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and had to read it all in one sitting! =) Its excellent so far, but I can;t believe you left it there!!!!
You need to come back and update soon!! Please!!
Great story!
Lady B*
You need to come back and update soon!! Please!!
Great story!
Lady B*
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. its interesting.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad that you aren't getting the reviews you so obviously deserve. This is a great story and I love how you have developed each of the characters, your descriptions are so clear I feel like I can actually see them. It is like watching a movie in your head! Please continue, don't punish the ones who are chomping at the bit for updates because of the uncaring mooches who refuse to review.