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She has to be with Dash.
SHE HAS TO!

tell me your contining this....

Wow this is soo good!!!!!


Please write more soon!!

it would be cool if you did some research on twins and put that inot the story.

I have a feeling that this is going to end up being my favorite of all your stories so hurry up and write another chapter

Roflmao. "Tiki Gods" they are so funny! I liked it. The three of them are hilarious. It's amazing they didn't end up missing it. I think that if I would have delayed as much as they did I would have gotten hit with that spoon.

Question: Can you maybe... translate the french (it is french right) into english like at the end of the chapter? I'd really like to know what she was saying. If not that's ok - will work around it.

"I rely on the kindness of strangers."
I love that quote. My favorite line from Streetcar Named Desire

Well I do hope you do continue with this. It's really interesting and I'm anxious to read more. One more question is the other twin (not Dash) but Jack - I think you spelled his name two ways - Jax at first and then you said Jack, is Jax like a nickname or a shorter way to spell it or something else? Just curious. Please update soon or when you get a chance.

please, please, please continue! it's really sweet and i would love to see what you do with it next.

I really like your two other stories "Maid to Lust" and "Noble Blood." This new story is completely different from them in the sense that it is not paranormal like you mentioned, and I'm really interested in how you take this. Please continue ^_^

Wow, this first chapter is no less spectacular than Maid to Lust. Twins have always posed a particular interest to me, please continue!

Hott concept - definitely continue. :-)