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schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person Ikippiki
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I really like your way of writing, I found the first chapter nearly poetic, so cool! Even if there is some grammatical errors, they are easily forgotten (not that I'm a specialist I do loads of errors too).
I'm really looking forward to the next updates! Continue your good work!
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You might want to run spellcheck before you post. But, hey, it's sexy slash.

Thanks! Sucked it up.

KD
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would be interested to see where this goes. Interesting start.
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining and unique. A few very minor typos that really didn't detract at all.

Nice work!