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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad that got sorted out
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Theli's just making it worse without knowing :D haha, I love this story
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... Eztli better get there soon so they can clear out that misunderstanding! >___<
It's a nuisance! LOL
I loved this chapter! And thanks ALOT for the updates!! :D X3 I can't wait to read more! *hugs*
...sorry for the short review! *goes hide under her bed* LOL
It's a nuisance! LOL
I loved this chapter! And thanks ALOT for the updates!! :D X3 I can't wait to read more! *hugs*
...sorry for the short review! *goes hide under her bed* LOL
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very original concepts. Would love to read more and learn more.
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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please add more soon. I LOVE original fantasy stories.. the world you have here is really original.. very surreal, very kewl..
can't wait to see how things work out.. well.. the things that lead up to things workin' out. ^__~
very kewl
Asialisek
please add more soon. I LOVE original fantasy stories.. the world you have here is really original.. very surreal, very kewl..
can't wait to see how things work out.. well.. the things that lead up to things workin' out. ^__~
very kewl
Asialisek
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love that little boy-bird ;;hugs him;; loved it
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It would really help if you double-spaced. The bunching of text makes this a bit hrd to read.
KD
KD
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, this looks like it'll be fun. I enjoy the 'mental' back and forth interaction, and possessive semes are just....fun. heh. I look forward to more!
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Eli, jumping to the wrong conclusion. Hmm, can't wait to see it from Theli's POV, because there were a few pauses in this that made me desperate to know what was going through Theli's mind :D
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story its great and very sexy, and I definite can't waite to read more! I also enjoy your writing style.... it makes me want to read every word and skip nothing...which is how I rate a story as good. If one skips words, it is a sign, they aren't necessary or revelent to the story. Please write more soon, I can't waite to see what happens next. Let your muse rule, love G