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WOW! Chapter 27 was so sexy!!! I love how you didn't have them going at it within the first couple of sentences. You made a sex scene into a whole chapter and not many authors could do that; you should be quite proud of yourself! It was so slow and sensual and you could really feel all of their emotions. This is how a LOVE (not sex) scene should be like. I truly love this chapter!

Another sweet chapter! This mysterious guy is creeping me out.

That was AMAZING! It was one of the best orgasmic love making scene I have ever read. I felt like I was alone for the ride. I think I nearly held my breath the whole time until they both climaxed. Wow...ok now I need some ice to cool down. Great chapter...I can't wait to read about Marcus and Jaden post bond. Wow bonded mates that's great. I'm happy for both of them. There love is amazing,

This is intense. I'm so happy to have shared Jaden and Marcus bonding and vows of love. They are truly a special couple. The ring described was amazing, I love how it fit perfectly for Jaden. I'm sure Adrian and Victor will be so happy for them. Now they all have mates and everything is going so well...but there is danger lurking so I'm looking forward to see how they fight off this new danger.
This is a really good story. Not only do you have so many avenues to discover, one being the council accepting Jaden, this vampire looking for Adrian and the revenge or stopping the people who hurt Jaden then not to mention exploring the love of Jaden and Marcus.
Oh I can't wait for your next chapter. This one was sooo great...I was so happy when I saw that you had updated so soon. Thanks for that!

Marcus and Jaden are so cute together. So my mind was really in the gutter when it came to ideas for the punishment. I just love reading about these two and their ever growing relationship.

I just love Jaden. He is soooo adorable. It makes me happy when these two are happy. When Jaden poured out his heart to Marcus and talked about respect and being a better person out of the love he has for him, it nearly brought me to tears. I think that was a great Christmas gift to Marcus and I know it meant so much to hear that. Hell if someone said that to me, someone I loved it would blow me away. What a special vampire/man, Jaden is.
Hmmm do I sense that they might actually do the wild them in the next chapter? Well either way I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter! Great work and can't wait for your update.

Adrian and Victor can be described in one word...delicious...i get a whole ray of dirty sexy thoughts when i think of those two. They play naughty chess...exciting, I'll have to try that. I love how Jaden is feeling more relaxed...I think having Adrian and Victor there has definitely helped him socially. And Marcus, what can I say. He is the epitome of grace and elegance and just hottness. They make such a cute couple...they so balance each other out and I think bring out the best in each other. This was a fun chapter...I can't wait to see what Jaden's "punishment" is. I have a feeling it's going to be some sexual goodness.
Great chapter! You rock in all ways!

sooo.... Marcus and Victor... are they greek or roman.. their names sound roman though... since -us and -or are latin word endings (or was it only -us...? never mind)

ooo punishment?
anyways, will jaden see the evil priest man, thing, person (what was his name again? sorry, 4 am in the morning, brain not working) when he goes to mass? i wonder what would happen... go marcus go! kill that evil bastard and his minions/cohorts (?) - i also wonder if that evil man will see jaden and freak? i mean, here's this young man that's supposed to be dead, walking around in broad daylight....er... nightlight....
Wonderful story! i blame you if i can't wake up tomorrow for school since it was your story that kept me up all night reading it!

Please please update soon! i love it so far! i wonder who that evil man in the shadow was?? O_o Lets hope he doesn't cause too much trouble... it would be interesting to read Victor and Adrian's story though... maybe as a paraquel to this one...ofcourse, when you finish Jaden :D looking foward to the next chapter^^

ah but probably good toast. I started reading Jaden and Marcus just hooked me in. Victor and Adrian, too absolutely hooked. So who is the old evil vampire and the third abuser - I wait to find out how they are caught.