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I wonder what will be Adrian's reaction to seeing Jaden on the disc. Everytime I think about it I want to weep again for Jaden. That poor boy has been through so much.
Speaking of Jaden, I hope he's in the next update. I really miss him in the story. I think it's time for him to wake up. There is so much that has happened since he fell asleep.
Can't wait for your next update, great chapter! Oh and Victor and Marcus acting like children had me laughing so hard...I guess brothers will be brothers just like grown men will always revert back to little boys...LOL!

2 updates in one week! Oh yeah! I so totally failed my midterm, but this update makes me feel a lot better. It seemed that for the longest it was just Marcus and Jaden, but now I get the feeling that we are about to meet a plethora of people. I just hope that at least some of them are good. Would asking for an update over the weekend be too much? Haha. Hey, I had to at least try. By now you should know that I am addicted to this story.

wonderful update, its interesting how you have named them...names you might give those of the old world and such...

Ah but will a "Master" vampire believe that others of his kind would take down the regular vamps- tsk! only if they are very very smart. sounds like Marcus and Victor have figured out what no one else has. Now to convince them without losing Jaden. Maybe Marcus & Victor with their mates can actually be strong than the ancients. hmmmm

Thanks for the update! The story line is just getting more intense as the chapters go. Please don't let the council take Jaden away! I'll be sad then. I just hope that they are able to find a way to protect themselves. I'll be looking out for the next chapter!

This chapter was filled with facts that will help in the upcoming story, and also give us a little vampire background on everything. I have to say I did miss Jaden in this chapter but still a very interesting chapter. I look forward to your next chapter!

Oh...now you have me waiting to see what was so important...so many things wondering through my head. Is it the impending doom of the guy that is stalking Adrian, or the council or the men who hurt Jaden or...oh I hope my brain doesn't explode before you update...just kidding...great chapter...i just love Marcus and Jaden...I didn't think I would ever think this but you made fingering sweet and sexy at the same time. They just melt my heart every time. I love them.

You left it when Marcus is going to speak to Jaden.. after the soarching sex/love scene... whenever they say I have to talk to you. ech. cindra rocks.

Hello!

whew! Just finished your latest chapter, and wow! I adore Jaden and Marcus! Now, though, I wanna know what Marcus has to say to Jaden... is it about the creepy guy outside the home? Yikes!

Great story! :) :)

Ooooh, I be loving it!!!!

Thank you.