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I love it!!!! I can't wait for more. Give Me More, please?

i have been reading this story straight for the entire day, i have to admit that this is definitely one of my favorite stories i am totally captivated by this storyline

you did an excellent job on the characters

how jaden reminds me of a small child at times makes me laugh

marcus is a total badass and adrian is just too cool for words

i look forward to seeing everything you do with this story i hope that you won't stop at this one and will continue to make more there are so many cool things you could do with this

by the way it's people like you that inspire me to write for myself you rock

i still cannot get over how great it is reading this the discriptions and the way you planned everything so well makes it perfect

keep it up you totally rock this site

i will tell all my friends to read this one

Hurray! Thanks for the new chapter. Jaden is quite daring/hungry to attack Ignatius. I am eager to find out what Ignatius has in mind for Adrian. He went to so much work to stalk and kidnap them. I am eager to see what happens next. I hope Marcus shows up soon.

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Thank you soooo much for the update!!!!!! I can't wait to see how it continues!!!! Poor Jaden and poor Adrian!!!!!! I really hope the one Jaden atacs is not Adrian but Ignatius or else we have a problem!!!! I asol hpe that together with jaden feeding and Adrian atacing they can overcome Ignatius!!!!! I hope Jaden does not fall into compleate hungermadness!!!!!!! This is such a wunderful story with a very nasty cliffhanger!!!!!! I hope you will not keep us hanging to long!!!! *see I'm hanging of this cliffy!!!!* And I really hope that the next update will be soon!!!!!!! See you next chappie!!!!!!!

Wow...just wow...i am so happy to have logged on and seen this update...it totally made my day! This was awesome and such a great read...and oh a cliffie...can't wait to see who Jaden bites...I hope they are able to escape or marcus and victor figure out who has them, really soon. i've missed this story and i'm so happy to see it update. can't wait for the next one...thanks so much!

who the hell is ignatius?! and what does he want with Jaden and Adrian?? Please don't let him hurt them both! They are just so innocent and lovable! Not when Jaden has recovered from his ordeal and Adrian too! Marcus and Victor, you two must act quickly! Hope it won't be too late!

oh i'm so excited that you updated...i've missed this story...sorry to here about all your notes...but that you for taking your time to let us know you haven't forgotten about this story...so many authors walk away from a good story...so thank you again for any and all updates...this was a great chapter...i was getting excited that adrian was about to feed from jaden and break them out and then bam! something or someone happened to stop them...oh i can't wait for the next update...what a great cliffie.

Wow that was so mind blowing thense!!!! I really love that you updated although it's sasd that you won't update for a while!!! But this chappie is absoloutly super!!! I really hope that Jaden and Adrian survive long enough for Victor and Marcus to rescue them!!!! I can't wait to see how this will continue!!! Hope that the next update doesn't take too long!! See you soon!!

Great updare. I am happy to see this story again. I am glad Jaden and Adrian are together in this ordeal and taking care of each other. Ignatius is very spooky. I hope we find out more about him. Looking forward to the next chapter.