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for Jaden

by jewel2656

person lunacy
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story telling. Please update soon.
person smint45
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awe that preview was so sweet and funny and sad and everything!!!! I can't wait for the actual chappie!!!! I thank you so much for posting this preview!!! I really love this story!!!! See you again soon!!!!
person The dark Lady voldemort666
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and I cant wait for more. I have read all 50 chapters in one go and loved every chapter. You are a wonderful writer and I am so happy that I found this story. Please keep up the great job. I really hope that you will be updating real soon cause I really need to be able to know what happens next!
person astra
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have spent the last four hours reading this I couldn't stop please please do keep going with this, I am hanging on the edge of my seat... Super story cookies to you. x
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm new to this story and I just spent three days reading the whole thing up to this point!!! And I must say, HOLY CRAP!!! I FREAKEN LOVE YOU!!! This story rocks! That's all I can say, I absolutely love it. It is just like a romance I would buy in store only with my favorite m/m pairings!! Please keep up the amazing work asap because now that I've been reading non stop for three days I'm going to go through Jaden withdrawl and I'm gonna need my fix as soon as humanly possible.
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. It was good to see Marcus and Jaden enjoying each other again and also being a little playful! Thanks for the update and of course looking forward to the next one!
person smint45
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo sweet!!!! Nice balance to the fast wecome back sex!!! I really liked this chappie!!!! And I can't wait for the "Back scrubbing" :3 I'm sorry I made you so much work with the formating but this chappie is way better to read!!!! I'm so happy that you are in a mood to write and that you update sooo fast!!! I'm always jumping of joy when you update this wonderful story!!! It is really one of my favorites!!! Thank you soo much for ths fantastic chappie!!! See you again soon!!!
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! That was one one the most romantic ways I have ever known love to be described! It was written so beautifully. I found myself tearing up because I realized that I want that kind of love. I want a love that moves! That is truly unconditional love. Through the whole thing all I kept thinking was please let me have that kind of love one day....ok enough of my wishing lol...This chapter was so intense and such a pleasure to read. It totally surpassed what ever I was expecting of a reunion. It was amazing and worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really curious to know how Marcus and Victor will react when they hear about everything Jaden and Adrian went through. It's all loving now. Anywho can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!
person smint45
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly bloody FANTASTIC!!!
And FAST!!!
And totally FLUFFY!!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!

Well not that this is said, on to the story!!! I really liked the way you discribed the differences if their relationships!!! We see how different love workes for Adrian and Victor who have been together for centuries and for Jaden and Marcus who just found love a few weeks ago!!! I'm so happy they are together finally!!! I hope it will stay that way for a while!!!

And the talk in the next chappie probably will not be as plesant as this chappie!!! I hope Marcus and Victor will not emediatly go on a killing frenzy!!!

I so loved this wonderful sweet chappie and I'm very greatful that this update was so fast!!! Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful chappie with us!!!
Hope to see you equally soon!!!
Till the next installment!!!
person smint45
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
P.S the formatting is still weird ^^