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bring me to life...Wow Marcus didn't pick up on jealousy that Jaden was feeling. It seemed obvious to me. I guess maybe he still doesn't know the way Jaden feels about him. Arghhh...when are these two going to be open with each other? I feel Jaden drops hints to Marcus but Marcus doesn't want to take advantage of Jaden. What does Jaden have to do? Jump his bones...hmmmm...that might be interesting.
I like the title Jaden. Because the story picks up when Jaden enters Marcus' life. As far as the other characters, it seems it is mostly Jaden's story because we will meet them when Jaden meets them. Although "Bring me to Life" works well too. Since Jaden and Marcus will bring love to each others lives...(here's hoping for soon.) So "Bring Me to Life" is a good title, since we are not just hearing this story from one person's point of view.

Awwwwwwwwww! That prick better run!

He's lucky he didn't hurt Jaden in front of Marcus! Ouch! lol

Thanks alot for the great updates! They're all awesome!

I can't wait 'till they become real lovers! hihi :D They're soooooooo sweet! ^^

And about the title change, well I REALLY like it as it is... "Bring Me to Life" just reminds me of Evanescence, while 'Jaden' reminds me of nothing but this story! >__> So I wont be much of a fan of the new title but we all know that's your choice if you want to change it or not, so I'm afraid this story will remain 'Jaden' in my mind >< Sorry! Hope you understand, it's no big deal tho! *hugs*

Anyways, I can't wait to read more! Thanks again for the updates! XDD :D

Oh I can't bare it. They have to admit their feelings to each other. It's a romance waiting to happen. Jaden and Marcus together would be so beautiful. They both seem like they need each other's love to feel complete. It's almost like they are yearning for each other. I can't wait for the next chapter.

So far a good read. I love the story so far and can't wait to see more of it

The way Marcus comforts Jaden and lets him heal by just being there is beauiful. They are developing a deep bond and connection, one that it seems Jaden needs. I love this story. Thanks for the update!

Henry needs more than just a simple gunshot. Yah, mom!

"when they heard the name Ebbe Dieter, both Jaden and Marcus agreed that was enough TV for this evening."

Muahahaha!!! That was funny! LOL :D hihi

Two losers gone YAYYYYYYY!!! I'm happy! XDD

Another great update! LOVED it! *hugs*

I can't wait to read more! ^^ Thanks for the update!

Only up to chapter 2. Loving it. Absolutely loving it. Marcus eh? heheheheh. Just love extra tall, extra gorgeous, extra masculine hunks of muffinly studness.

Just had to say that...continuing reading onwards now.

OMG!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED chapter 12!!!!!! IT WAS FANTASTIC!! :D XDDD

Totally perfect! Man, this story rocks!!! =)

Get that son of a bitch outta this world!!! Kill him! grrr And throw his remains to the wolves! He better die!!!

Go! Mrs Cleary!!!! Muahahahahaha!!! Make that asshole pay! grr

Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this!

Thanks alot for the chapter! I LOVE it! *grins* XD

Hiya. You asked for reviews, although I've only gotten to the second chapter so I've no idea whether or not you have received them. The story and plot are fantastic, but the grammar is slightly lacking. The story doesn't flow because of it. Don't feeeel ((sorry my kitten just pounced on my back)) bad its normal for first stories. If you would like a beta, though, I would happily volunteer.