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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter. I adore this couple.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This scene between brothers was excellent. To hear Marcus talk about Jaden to his brother was endearing. He spoke of so much love that you could sense. I loved hearing Victor telling Marcus he would help and protect Jaden also. And to read about Victor's love for Adrian was beautiful. Wow these brothers know how to love hard and with everything they have. One can only hope to find a love that strong. Great chapter, I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for updating so quickly. I look forward to your next update.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY Marcus and Jaden have finally admitted their love to each other. I think I held my breath through that entire part. It was excellent and worth all the waiting. I just loved Adrian and Victor, they are too delicious. I can't wait to read how this family spends their Christmas. Beautiful job, and beautiful writing. I can't wait for your next update. Thanks!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my absolute favorite stories on the site. i checked out your profile; i can't believe you say you're not a writer. your writing is exquisite!
btw i bet you'd get loads more reviews if you allowed anonymous reviewing. i think there are a great deal more people that read the site who aren't registered.
i'm a little worried about this warning that other vampires would steal jaden away if they could. i hope he and marcus bond so nothing ugly happens to poor jaden, he's already been through so much.
btw i bet you'd get loads more reviews if you allowed anonymous reviewing. i think there are a great deal more people that read the site who aren't registered.
i'm a little worried about this warning that other vampires would steal jaden away if they could. i hope he and marcus bond so nothing ugly happens to poor jaden, he's already been through so much.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I can't wait for Marcus to KILL those freak'n assholes! grr Such Son-of-a-Bitches!!!!!
Skin them alive! >___< grr they deserve it for god's sake!
Shit, those 'man' don't deserve the big houses they live in, hell, they don't even deserve to sleep in a dog's niche! Damn them to hell! LoL
Exactly what they deserve after what they did (and still obviously do)!
Anyways, thank you for the two great chapters! I loooooooooooved them! *hugs*
I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
Skin them alive! >___< grr they deserve it for god's sake!
Shit, those 'man' don't deserve the big houses they live in, hell, they don't even deserve to sleep in a dog's niche! Damn them to hell! LoL
Exactly what they deserve after what they did (and still obviously do)!
Anyways, thank you for the two great chapters! I loooooooooooved them! *hugs*
I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was extremely happy upon finding that you have updated this story. I realized I had missed the chapter preceding this one.
I hope Jaden and Marcus would soon be able to voice their true love to one another. If only one or both would speak up. I got so excited when Jaden told Marcus he loved him and Marcus said it back...but of course they both thought they only meant friendship, but it is so much more. I can't wait for your next update, I hope it is soon. Thanks!
I hope Jaden and Marcus would soon be able to voice their true love to one another. If only one or both would speak up. I got so excited when Jaden told Marcus he loved him and Marcus said it back...but of course they both thought they only meant friendship, but it is so much more. I can't wait for your next update, I hope it is soon. Thanks!
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jaden. He and Marcus love each other they just need to figure out how to get it out in the open. I hope that he does kill those sickos. And in really painful ways too.
I love this story. I hope that you will have more for us soon.
I love this story. I hope that you will have more for us soon.
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum yum... I just love vampire stories. I have a few more chapters to go before I finish, but I can see you have put so much effort and imagination into this story. It flows on effortlessly and it's very very sexy. It's also rich with actions and things that are constantly going on, not only sex. There is a good plot. I like it a lot.
By the way, do you remember when you gave me a review on Vanilla and said that you like the Raoul/Katze pairing? Hehehe... I took that advice and based Katze's Diary on that. :) Thanks for the support.
Take care
By the way, do you remember when you gave me a review on Vanilla and said that you like the Raoul/Katze pairing? Hehehe... I took that advice and based Katze's Diary on that. :) Thanks for the support.
Take care
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooooooooooo. when will Marcus and Jaden be paying those men who tried to kill Jaden? I hope you make it as painful for those sickos as you possibly can. Maybe give them a dose of their own medicine, neh?
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your Marcus. Get the job done viciously and efficiently. Big snuggles on the bear too.
P.s. you got loooong paragraphs. Not saying anything bad about it, I just need bifocals and I'm too cheap (aka broke) to get them.
P.s. you got loooong paragraphs. Not saying anything bad about it, I just need bifocals and I'm too cheap (aka broke) to get them.