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Thanks for the update and we love you too! So a punishment huh? Sounds kinky. Now I'm really going to be stalking AFF for the next update.

Awww the snow scene with Jaden was sooo cute, I love his little rambles!

Oh this story is just delightful Jewel, it has me laughing so much.

Punch a woman's lights out? Aboslutely!

Oh no! Who is this creepy pond luker?

Marcus and Jaden are just too cute together. Marcus could write a book on how to articulate love; Barry White has nothing on this man! Goodness what a romantic! Victor and Adrian are just soo loveable too, they all make such a cozy family! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Oh no, and I thought the council might be their next big hurdle...it looks like this family is about to encounter a threat. I hope they are prepared. I wonder who this guy is and how long has he been stalking Adrian and Victor. At least they have Marcus and Jaden as back up...what a cliffie...I can't wait to read the next chapter. And I hope Marcus' security system is working properly...I think they are going to need it.
Soulmate is a perfect way to describe Marcus and Jaden.

Liking this very much. Love the drama you are building with the council and Adrian's maker? Keep plugging along. I'm routing for ya!

Go!!! Go!!! Goooo!!!!

Rico and Sammy got what they deserved; I loved how it was done in song.

I laughed a little when I got to the part where Marcus is carrying the boy to his real home, all I could think about was Brinks home security wished it was this good!

I love this story! You did a really really good job. It flows well and keeps my attention and on that note I'm going back to reading =)

What the hell is going on now? I knew things were just going to nicely. Thanks for updating! It seems that we might get Adrian's story sooner than I thought. Please don't let anything too bad happen!!!

I've finally caught up on all of the past updates! I feel like the shit is going to hit the fan for some very important top officials. I still can't get over the senator's wife. She knows what her husband does and that he is hurting someone's child, yet she really isn't telling anyone so he can be stopped. Yes, she has her reasons for not saying anything, but that still isn't a good enough excuse. I'm so happy that Marcus and Jaden are finally together. I really hope that Jaden will be able to heal one day so that he and Marcus really can move on together. I hope Kharma is a bitch for those who hurt Jaden!!! I can't wait until the next update.

A little bit of sexual release...I'm so happy they found that. It was so romantic and none rushed and filled with love. I can't imagine these two loving each other more than they do right now...It's amazing. I am so happy you updated...this story captivates me everytime amd I just love it. Thanks for the quick update again...you're spoiling us and I like it. Can't wait to read more of Marcus and Jaden and the new additions to Jaden's life, Victor and Adrian.
Oh and the playfulness with Jaden and the dog was priceless. It was nice seeing Jaden uninhibited and free. It made me smile and a nice segue way to Jaden and Marcus getting frisky.