rate_review Reviews

ive missed this story and cant wait till you get it back up and i get to read the new chapters that you have wrote and i just know they are going to be wonderful!
much love

I think you're setting up some interesting characters. Visuals are real good. Questions? Lots, but I guess those are the story, so I'll hold off for now. At the moment, this whole test has me curious. ^x^ Excellent writing, did I mention that before...

Yes! Please continue! This is the right story. I emailed Mitts and told her, and she was really glad you were back- said she can't wait until you get to new chapters she hasn't read yet.

By the end of the chapter I had the names sorted out. I like how sinister these guys are. What did Heath see? Or is that explained later? Or does it just not matter? I get this feeling Colin is walking a tightrope- he made a deal with the devil to save his ass, but has to hide he's not all that happy about it.

The guy from the first chapter is about to mix in with these thugs? I don't think it'll do much for his homelife. Has he a clue what - or should I say who he's getting involved with? Is he the one bought and paid for? Once in, it won't be easy getting back out right?

It was a lot of names for one chapter, and I had to read a couple parts twice to get them straight and a couple typos, which I will gladly point out if you want. There's not enough to distract from the story, or the excellent writing. That real sexual power line of Diesel's-- great!! Thanks.

Chapters 1 & 2

Love the sick and violent, domineering sex maniac Vin!
Love the worshipping, sex assistant Jarod!! More Jarod!!
The violence is good!! Sick, but seems in keeping with
Vin's business. Nice slashy tone to chapter 2!!

Thanks,
R

Whooooooooo hoooooooooooooo (doing the insane chocobo happy dance) Midnight, you're back! I've been checking and checking....and checking and checking....and checking and checking some more....lol

Are you going to be putting up all the chapters at once? Or are you going to space them out? If you put up one chapter a week, thats 34 weeks I have to wait till you get back to where you were. I don't think I can wait over half a year lol

Hi hon, yup, still with you and hope you get the rest of the chapters here soon! I can't wait to see what happens to your characters :) BTW did you ever get an answer for why your penname was taken off?

Only two days ago I got an email from a friend, upset that a story she really liked "Running Blind" on aff was gone. Or I guess, that the author was gone. I had never heard of this story, but I checked for her and it came up on search, with no author listed. Strange. I was tempted to read it, I trust her taste, but it had... thirty? forty? chapters. Anyway, she thanked me, hoped "midnighteyes" would be back to write someday. That was a fast someday. I dont tempt fate anymore than necessary. I had to read this. It has to be the same story, right?

So I read it. You're an amazingly good writer, but I didn't really get much of what the story is about from ch 1. New job. Happy family scene with undertones. (not many things in the world cuter than little girl with puppy) That's fine. You promised it would be good? Awesome even? Then I'll keep reading. Thanks.

i wondered where you went too, and so i searched through the 'romance' archive and found your legolas/viggo story (the title escapes me at the moment.) the last review was from someone accusing you of plagiarism, so maybe the mods here acted on that? it's strange no one contacted you before disabling your account. i would email someone in charge to get to the bottom of it.

I'm really excited to read what happens next. I'm liking it so far!

Thanks sveta for letting me know.. I did not know.. I was confused at what was going on. And i'm glad your liking this story... This is my story and if anyone does not like it.. Do not read it!!