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Chapter Five

Intriguing! So they wanted a guy NOT into guys!!! Hmm!
Angel and Sean are the same person? I gotta go back and
read it again!!! Jared is a sexy beast and the guy on guy sex
for the benfit of making Brad comfortable so he would have guy
sex was interesting!!
Yes!!! More scenes in this office trying to convince
Brad to have sex with men getS my vote!!!!

Thanks,
R

er, ah, this is chapter 5 posted again. ^-^

Still as good as when I read it the first time..still have to fan myself down, lol.
I still think you should tell how of Vin came to take Orlando in the first place though. I mean, how did the boy accept it? Was he threatened into losing his virginity? Was he bought with gifts and money? Or did Vin just take him? I'd love to know...

The boss and his sort of lieutenant both have their eyes on Orlando, but top dog rules- for now. This can't be good. And he's only fifteen???

These guys are rich and powerful... but they don't get out much, do they? Vin needs to seriously turn himself in to the nearest straight jacket club. Poor Orlando and Sonia, too- can't wait for the back story of all this!

Now I understand why Vin would need anyone he hires to be tested for loyalty. I'd turn his ass in! And end up like that first guy... you do weave a plot!! So now comes Brad's test, that should be fun! Keep posting, and thanks.

(Impatiently hopping foot to foot....) Hurry...Hurry Midnight. I'm dying to read any new chapters you've done too!!!

Ohhhh I loved this chapter...This is the one I was telling Vivid all about. It is soooooooo yummy, lol

Chapter 3

Like the gritty atmosphere and the gritty/violent people
that inhabit this story. Curious to see what they are testing
Brad for. (What's his job going to be and such?)

They want him hetero?! Where would the slash be in that?!! HA!!

Thanks,
R

Chapter 4

Ooh!! That's what Vin keeps at home!!
A little sex kitten!! Or sex slave!! Or enslaved
little sex kitten!! How old is that kid anyway?!!
He sounds young, and Vin is one kinky, violent dude!!

That shower scene was hot!!
Thanks,
R

So-- a chink in Vin's armor. He's nasty and arrogant, typical dismissing attitude toward his help... yet mention of his 'twink at home' riles him. Interesting. Kinky shower scene, written really well. Vin is actually obsessed with this Orlando, (why?) who seems to like and fear him both. Which means Vin has something on him, right? Someone wants him dead or something? Once more, too many questions so I'll shut up. Except, what happened to that test for the other guy?

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One thing about this story- the plot keeps twisting in unexpected directions, which makes it a really fast and interesting read. I like it more with every chapter, and you're definitely heading for awesome, so keep posting please. ^_^

Geez, I forgot how sorry I felt for Jared, right from the beginning of this story. He is so poorly treated.