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Ooo...Seans breaking rules, what ever will Vin do? Good chapter, can't wait to read more.

I really love this story. I love the style and the colloquialisms, and i think Vin and Orlando's relationship is so dysfunctional but very interesting. Thanks for all the stories!! I really enjoyed Moonlight and Madness too!

I love your story, but if the characters aren't yours doesn't that make this a fanfic?

gaaaaaaaaaah!!!
that was it?! *sobs* sorry, i expected more... =X
it was like, the fun was just begining and then it suddenly ended.... =x=

more! more~ more orlando! what's gonna hapen to him? something's goonnnaa happen right? i just know it!

OHMY~!!!! Me like this fic! ^____^
give more about Vin and Orlando's relationship! how did it start! what's with all those rules?! no tV?! har? like why?

and this brad! (why's he named after brad pitt o_O""" )
he's a traitor ne? but for who? and why?!

will the comming chapters be something like:
orlando gets kidnappeed, tortured for some secret about vin he knows...
or something like that~?
o0o0o0o0h~~ me like angst! ^____^

good fic! nice nice~ really good!
update please! ^___^

I was so excited to see a new chapter, but I'm confused and see that the last two chapters are the same. Was there a clitch on the AFF web site? Hope you see this soon and are able to fix it. I can't wait to see what happens at the Birthday party.

I just finished all of your chapters in one reading while on vacation, and I have to say this story has me hooked. I can’t wait to see what happens at the party. I just know Vin is not going to like it when Orlando sees his new puppy, but I worry that if he likes the puppy more then the hamster is Vin going to take it out on the poor kid. Oh Sean you may have caused him more pain then you realize. In the last chapter, I wonder who was in the limo. And who was the POV character? Was it Sean plotting against Vin? Was it Brad or Colin? Oh so many questions and I am begging for an update soon to find out. Of course I’m sure all the readers know that all of your characters are the celebrities everyone loves, Jared is Jared Leto? Orlando Bloom, Eric Bana, Brad Pitt, Angelina Jolie and so on…. Hummm how interesting to see them all in this way, I have to say I like it, I like it very much. Oh my, wouldn’t it be funny if they actually read this? Good job, I look forward to more!

For some reason, Vin reminds me of Sephorith, the evil General of Final Fantasy fame. Gee, I don't know why. I missed a chapter, sorry bout that. So, it should be interesting when the new bodyguard finds out he's really a boyguard. That should seriously disturb him, he seems normal enough. Orlando has a brother??? Does this brother have a clue? And what's Sean's problem? And why does Jared put up with being treated like that? And if Orlando never goes anywhere or meets anyone, who's coming to his party? And what did Heath do? Was he a pervert, too? I get that impression by the test Brad had to take... that was very interesting, btw. You sure can make a cluster** of dispicable characters. So far, I like Shiloh and her pup. ^-^

Good story. Keeeep writing... (please. thanks.)

Oohhh we're getting slowly closer to where you left off the last time your account messed up...

Hurry hurry Midnight. I'm aching to see how the story continues.

With that new chapter five, it all falls into place! These guys remind me of the roman emperors I've been studying... how little we've changed in all those centuries... instead of chattel slavery, we have salaried slavery and power still corrupts into what seems almost insane...

I like how you use names of people I recognize, so much less work than the way we figure out names for characters! It's a unique idea that sets your story apart, props for that.

So, read up to chapter nine and very interested still in the back story and what this is all leading up to! Thanks.