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by midnighteyes

schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a kidnapping is deeefiiinaaateeellyyyy gonna take place~
and brad is sooo screwed when that happens

and i see sean has his own minions too~ cool, not bad not bad~

dragging out the tension before the climax eh? XD
well dun kill us with the suspense! update already! XD
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally getin back
been waiting n waiting
to get back to where we were lol
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hurry up~!!!!!! omg >>>>>....<<<<
what;s the deal with dragging it out so slowlyyyyy??????????

what's to happen now?!?!?!??!?!

update please!!!!!
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have a LJ? may I have the link please?

anyway, I have a suggestion, why dont you compile the few chapters, and post them as one whole chapter?
Its not really a chapter update but more like a snippet...
I mean, chapter's are longer, and usually show a few scenes. not just one situation...

Sorry I'm complaining XD I want to read more! XD
person kylienna
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mog! I love this story! i couldn't take my eyes away from the screen. lol I like the emotions you have going on. It's nice.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*A*

development!

slightly~

give more!

*A*
person Mitts
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY....Now we're getting close to where you were forced to leave off.
Yep, I still keep checking your story. I can't wait to start reading the new chapters that I haven't already read. And it's been really enjoyable re-reading the old chapters too, lol.
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you like torturing your readers do you?
giving little snippets of update that's barely satifying!!!
gah!!! but its good nonethe less!
i have half the mind to NOT check on this fic for a month or so, then maybe when i come back there's at least 2 chapters to read~ XP
hehehehehe~

oh. from what this chapter shows... its like as thou brad is a walking man magnet himself...
what if cute orlando gets attracted to brad instead of the other way round like vin's so worried about?
hahahah that'd be interesting~ ;)

so we have brad and orlando... two walking talking men magnets of polar opposites...
i mean one's obviously seme and the other's obviously uke...
somehow.....
this just spells out "T-R-O-U-B-L-E"
which will be fun ne? ^_____^

longer updates please!!! this short lil snippets are agitatingly painful!!!
thank you~! XD
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o______________o

well... now we know that jared has it really bad for vin...
and well.. vin couldnt care less....
and jhonny... wants vin too? XD

get on with the party!!!!
good night~ ;3
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaahh.... 3 factors to add to Vin's potential anger and Orlando's torture?

1) the puppy
2) Sean going into Vin's room
3) Orlando stepping out of the room

1 + 2 + 3 = big trouble
yes? no? wont know till an update comes out~ XP

bwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh vin's a control freak i tell ya! control freak! how dare he make orlando cry on his birhtday! and does orlando like/love vin back? can't tell really.... @____@

the birthday procession is moving on slowly~ but somehow, it feels like something big is stewing up~
does that something have to do with brad?
and what with orlando's brother comming~
whao whao whao~~~

updatez please~!!! XD