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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story just gets more intersting by the minute :D The lemon was hot!!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story beter and better..... please do continue!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am all for lemons.
Grow me a grove.
KD
Grow me a grove.
KD
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good direction...good plot, though I would like to know a bit more about what Alavas has been doing...good characters...anything else? Oh yeah--more please!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ur story's really good Pixie!!! =) Don't worry about that! hihi I'm loving this alot! ^___^
I'm glad this things are looking ok for Tansa! And he DOES need some sleep! :P
Anyways, I can't wait to see more pf this story! Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*
I'm glad this things are looking ok for Tansa! And he DOES need some sleep! :P
Anyways, I can't wait to see more pf this story! Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. As for mistakes due to English being your second language, I say, the reader who has a problem with it should write a fic in another language before they judge.
Good start.
KD
Good start.
KD
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merveilleux et étonnamment mignon! Heh, french is my second language XD. I'm kinda horrible at it to be honest. Anyway, for english being your second language this is well written. I absolutely love it. I hope you update again soon.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how this goes.... please do continue!!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh~ I like this! But it's so sad that Tansa can't even remember his own name!!! T____T The poor guy! *hugs him tight*
His Master was an asshole! And a bastard! The worst Master ever! >< I hate him! grr
Tansa seems to have went through alot! ;; I sure hope Alavas can help him recover and get better now! :)
He looks like a nice guy! I like him! ^^
I can't wait to see what u'll do with the story! Thanks alot!! *hugs* XD :P
His Master was an asshole! And a bastard! The worst Master ever! >< I hate him! grr
Tansa seems to have went through alot! ;; I sure hope Alavas can help him recover and get better now! :)
He looks like a nice guy! I like him! ^^
I can't wait to see what u'll do with the story! Thanks alot!! *hugs* XD :P