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for MasterMine

by KitsuR

person Nboulet
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! :)
person Leentjef
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
post soon bye bye
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Master is sooo ornery. LOL
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo what a wicked punishment! It's very creative though. It made me giggle. That is, as long as it's not happening to me. LOL
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You(and he) are amazingly descriptive writers! I love reading this.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a way to wake up! I am sure he was pleased. lol

As always, this was another lovely descriptive chapter! I bet that bite hurt. I am curious to read what punishment he thinks up. lol

schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is so cool! You two write erotic prose for each other. :D

Now this was lovely and decedent. And very sensual, just like your other chapters. It was fascinating reading the other side. Please keep up your erotic correspondence! lol
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeek, wonderful description! The incident with the rosebush had me cringing, literally, especially when you talked about the thin scratch on her throat that was barely just deep enough to bleed. Ahhhg! lol

That was so exquisite though, how her lover attended to her, stripping her of her clothing, running his tongue along her collarbone. Very nice! In some ways, this story is all about sensation isn’t it. It’s very erotic. Keep up the great work!


schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love all the decedent smutty goodness! This is a very nice PWP! :D
In some ways it seems sort of surreal though, since you don’t use names and I don’t really get a sense of time or place. I mean you mention the restaurant, yet it still has that fantasy quality, if you know what I mean. You write very well though. So keep up the great work! :D