rate_review Reviews

I really hate serialized novels because I'm so impatient. (So what am I doing on this site? I'm a masochist?) Now, I'm trying to decide if I would be happier with these short, more frequent chaplets, or if I'd be happier waiting long periods of time for more meaty chapters. This story is like going to a wedding reception where you get little tiny bits of deliciousness. Tasty, but not enough to satisfy. It feels like you're teasing us; maybe we will get a nice thick cut of beef tenderloin, or maybe just a cracker with some caviar. Then it turns out the be the cracker and I'm so hungry!!!! I'm willing to wait a little longer and harass you less if I can have the tenderloin...with Bearnaise sauce, please. Clearly, you know how to make it.

So glad to see the update! I have to say I am alittle confused, what just happened in the ch? Who woke up and whohad the flashback? And who was screaming and crawling away and why? Where did the blood come from? Who had been screaming when they were awake?

I LOVE IT!
it's creepy hotness and just everything
it's definately an original piece
I don't think I've come across a zombie human relationship before
so I'm curious to see whats going to happen.
anyways neat chapter
can't wait till the next chapter

I wonder how he is going to nurse the zombie or even feed it?

This story seems very intersting.. :D Can't wait for next chapter.

scritch, scritch, ruffle, ruffle, pet, pet. That's me stroking your ego, just like a cat. No go write more!

Very... interesting, to say the least. Usually I'm not a fan of strange couplings like this but your story has me strangely riveted. I like the perspective of it, and your descriptions are really well done, gives you a very clear view of what's going on. I can't wait to read more!

kinda weird and kinda gross when i think bout it but its still pretty hot

Too short! Too short, too short, too short. Kinda gross, but riveting. Need more! Keep going!

Please keep going with this one. I like that this story is different. I don't have any helpful criticism at this time; I just wanted to encourage you to continue.