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for The Hawks

by Ambers79

person littleolmee
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed how you handled this problem between them. The staff is really interesting too. I wonder if Shadow will always have so little trouble bringing Sunhawk back or if some battles will be harder to leave? Love the story, thanks for the update. Take care and keep up the great work.
person BlackCat
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I just found your story and instantly fell in love with Sunhawk and the adorable Shadow. I read all 14 chapters and want more. I almost passed it by but was glad I didn't. Did you think maybe of posting it under the Slash catagory instead of Fantasy. Just an idea, you might find you get more hits and reviews.
Either way, I am hooked and look forward to more updates. Great story.
person nyge98
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and I am really enjoying it. It is a fun story to read with a great love element as well. I can't wait till the next chapter. I'm glad Shadow was finally able to totally except Sunhawk.
person RJaneyP
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your Hawks, its a great love story... it takes flight and I can't wait to read more. G
person littleolmee
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how did I miss this story? So wonderful. Love the characters and the twists and turns of the story line. Hee, hee read all the chapters you have posted in one sitting, couldn't stopped if I tried. It just pulled me in and wouldn't let me go. Thank you for posting this story on AFF as well, got another one to keep an eye out for now. Take care and keep up the great work, I really enjoy your writing.

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