rate_review Reviews

I am really enjoying The Hawks. Your characters are amazing. The detail of their personalities, and not just of the main 2 but all of them, are great. It is an exciting love story and has a nice pace to it, allowing it to be believable. I am so in love with Shadowhawk and Sunhawk. They certainly are a powerful couple. I can't wait for your next update. What a great story, I love it.

Have been reading the story avidly - but what on earth happened to the spellchecking/grammar this time? So many mistakes that I gave up after a few paragraphs. Will come back in a few days though - hopefully you'll have edited/sorted by then. 'Purr

I love this story. The plot, the action, the romance. It all brings out an intensity that leaves you craving for more. Please update soon. Awesome writing.

Great chapter, was so happy to get to read an update to one of your stories. Is Teal really up to no good or is just his attraction to Shadow making Sunhawk worry about having competition for Shadow's love? Can't wait to see how things go when Teal returns and lessons begin. Thank you for the update.

Your story is amazing! I just finished it and enjoyed reading every bit of it. Sunhawk and Shadow are two really intriguing characters. I love how the characters and their relationship developed throughout the story. The pace is great, allowing the relationship to develop into a belivable one. There is just the right amount of setting described. Everything is good,especially Sunhawk's double personality/mindframe. But I'd like to see you writing more about Shadow's majic ability and perhaps him using it in battle. This story is promising so far! Well done, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yay!! This chapter was brilliant!! I just saw that you have updated and I'm sooo happy! Looking forward to more :)

I'm glad I started reading this story - its my favorite kind, with the setting and all. Will be looking forward to more chapters.

i love this story,but its a cliff hanger since i really want to know who this new guy is.

Wonderful chapter, they are back home now and seem to be trying to enjoy the peace. Hmm who is this new man that showed up for a little show? Ah that would be terribly hard for Shadow if the man is his new teacher, especially after he seen all he had to offer like that. I wonder if Sun needs to be worried? Thank you for the update, keep up the great work.

^_^ I love your story! The title caught my eye and I couldn't stop reading! I really like the story line and the warm sexy soft hard love between Sunhawk and Shadowhawk!:)! I think it's so cool how their names both end in hawk. I have enjoyed reading this:) Really looking forward to the mysteries new teacher and what he had in store!