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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story. The characters, while unique, were believable and interesting. I ended up reading the entire storyline in one sitting, simply because I could not wait to see where Shawdowhawk and Sunhawk when together. I found the pacing to be rather appropriate, and while I was occasionally baffled at Shadow's ability to cope, I found that it was believable if only because of his calm and understanding nature. You have truly created welll dimensioned characters. I hope that you continue to update.
-Jet
-Jet
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hpe this story wasn't abbandened cause i realy think it interesting an i hope to be able to read more.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated this story. This was a really good chapter. I look forward to your next one. Sunhawk might be right about Teal, but Sunhawk might have more to worry about Teal than Shadow does. I hope Shadow and Sunhawk both stay safe. I can't wait and read about all Shadow has learned, especially with the staff. Please update soon.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! I'm glad that Shadow decided to go and find Sunhawk and not let Teal cause even more tension between them. At least now we have some background on Teal, but I still don't see how he can be a danger to Shadow. I was proud that Shadow was able to speak up for his own believes about the Hawks and not just let Teal say what ever about them. I'll be looking out for the next update.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT STORY!!! i couldn't stop reading it, it was amazing!
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow it's been a while. I liked this ch. I still agree with Sunhawk there is something fishy about Teal. Oh there were a bunch of typos too like joined words and missing letters and apostrophes. I think it might be your converting program.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you started writing this story again. I love it! It gets better with each chapter. Thanks for the update and I am truly looking forward to the next one...:0)
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story please update soon
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! He he... Poor Sunhawke... his feelings about Teal tranferred to me :) Looking forward to more.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think sunhawk has much to worry about, but who knows besides you! And there were a lot of minor errors in this chapter. Might want to take a looksee.