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for The Hawks

by Ambers79

person roro237
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! This chapter was just what I needed to relax and escape. It's been a long day:) I can't wait to read what Mith will answer?! The Hawks belong together ^_^
person Leeana69
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this fic, but Shadow seems a little too trusting for someone who was raped.
person roro237
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you haven't gave up on this story! I enjoy it so much. I was worrie about Teal comming between them but it seem there is something bigger happening. Can't hardly wait for the next chapter ^_^
person littleolmee
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh more information on Sunhawk and his adversion to magic coming I think. Poor Shadow to fall sick right now. Great update, I can't wait to see what happens and if those two can bridge their differences, fix their problems and stay together.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god as if the last chapter wasn't heartbreaking enough. It feels like their about to walk a doomed road.
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh i hope everything work out. I absolutely love this novel. A novel because i feel that it is written exquisitely like a novel, so enchanting and heart warming. I love the plot and especially the couple. Please update soon.
person mcdgoddess
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I was so excited when I saw it was up! Is it too much to ask for these two to just have a little happiness? I guest it would be kind of boring if there wasn't some drama. I still can't figure out why Sunhawk hates magic, but I do hope that he soon realizes just how important it is to Shadow and the work that he does for Sunhawk's men. I mean the man could have lost his best soldiers if Shadow didn't have is magic. I know it makes Shadow feel like he is contributing to the group. I really hope that Teal doesn't have anything to do with this because if he does, then I hope Sunhawk beats the crap out of him. I hope that they are able to prove to Mith that they belong together.
person mcdgoddess
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! And I thought things were getting better. I'm so hooked to this story! I'm wondering if Teal has something to do with this whole mess. I'm going to be stalking AFF now for the next update.
person roro237
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW! that just put my stomach in knots...WoW! Two problems at once. Looking forward to see what you have in store next time ^_^
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Exciting update. I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see how shadowhawk and sunhawk handle this new threat to their relationship. Hopefully they will come out stronger than ever. Can't wait for you next update.