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for The Hawks

by Ambers79

person Ej
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Like this story a lot, it just keeps getting better. Looking forward to the next update!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, shadow is so cute and huggable. This is such an adorable story.
person smint45
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't belive Sirius could be so gentle!!!! I really liked Shadows confession and how he helped him!!!! I can't wait to see if everythin gwill get to a good ending!!!! I'm really happy you updated!!! See you next chappie!!!!
person smint45
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update!!!! This is really totally exciting!!!! Finally we get to know something about Sunhawks past!!! I can't wait to see where this is leading!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
person Bizarro
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually like the story and the idea however the first chapter annoyed me a lot with over use of the word "boy" >.> try lad, kid, brat, youngin, he, etc.
person kylee123
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved it. I like the promise of hope for Sunhawk. I just hope he will finally share his story with Shadow. it sounds like it will be some story.
person smint45
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chappie!!! I really hope that shadow can help Sunhawk!!! I really hope you will update soon, cause i love this story!!! Hope to see you next chapiie!!
person smint45
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I have also read the 25 chapter. Wow now Sunhawk is allowed to speak with the goddess. How will Sirus take that? Probably not good cause Mith must have called for him otherwise he coudn't go into the oracel room! I truely hope we get to know all of Sunhawks past in the next chappie! I truely want to know!! I hope that shadow will hear his past too and not only Mith!!! And of cause I hope the get to be together and with Miths blessing if possible, so that Shadow will not suffer so much!! Poor Shadow!! But in the last chapters he's gotten so firece and strong he so different from the beginning!! I'm probably on vacation when you next update comes but I will continue to review when I'm back, as long as you update that is!!! Hope to see more soon!!
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful addition to the story! The plot thickens! Mwhahah! I luffled it~ And thanks for the smexings. ^_^
person reid
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mith is going to bless them right please please please oh please say yes i'd feel so bad for shadow if he lost her and what an ass of a prist i hope we gets proven wrong in the most embarrassing way (laugher)