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So, this story is completely not what I expected it to be. That said, I love really good surprises and this is one of them! You definitely have my attention and I hope you keep going with this one.

Tristan is the best! There is nothing like having a dad that you can talk to about anything. Even your bondage fetish. I think Tristan gave Tir some good advice especially about Marek. I think Tir would be wise to tell Tristan about his link to Feras and Ebony. Tristan is definitely very perceptive when it comes to magic. I am so eager for Tir to make up with Marek. I do love Marek so much - he is so hot! I think Tir should realize that the fight probably hurts Marek more than it does Tir. If Tir's brothers love him they will want him to be happy.

<3 tir and his father xD

i love this, ^^ i cant wait for more

ooh...i hate fights... please let them make up soon!
ASOTA

Come back Marek! How can they make such sweet love and then end up fighting on the same day? Tir and Marek need to be together. I don't want Tir's brothers to come between him and Marek. It's no wonder Elgin can't stand to see the relationship between Tir and Marek. The twin's father was even more cruel to Elgin than he was to Tir. Sounds like a problem! Maybe Drake and the dragons will be able to show Elgin that Marek has a good side as well. Tir needs to take care of his brothers but that doesn't mean he should let them influence his own relationships.

Well this is geting really difficult!! I really hope they will solve their problems, both with his brothers and with Marek!!! I really don't like to see them fighting :´( Hope to see you soon!!!

Tir and Marek my favorite couple! The very best opening scene. So hot. So hilarious. I was so happy. Tir and Marek make such beautiful love together. I think Tir might be opening a can of worms if he tries to find his stepfather. I am sorry for the twins but I dont think anything good will come from trying to find their dad. He sold Tir into slavery. He should be grateful if the King allowed him to live. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Awesome story!!! I can't wait to read what happens next. XD

Hmmm, delightful Marek/Tir, me likes! <3
As for his brothers, couldn't he just explain the "Punishment" comment away as a joke of sorts? They're what, twelve? I don't think they'd think much of it. ^^;;