rate_review Reviews

It took 3 freaking days to read this! And it was worth it! ;)

I love your story, and these last couple chapters were great XD I really didn't like that they punished him for doing what he felt in his heart was right. Since he is free he should be able to make his own decisions. I really hated that, especially since he seems insecure about it, and he loves them.
Otherwise I loved the chapters :D
Jades

i love you devilish mind you just have a way with words, longing for more

Squee~!!!
x3
Luffles it!

another delicious chappie im drooling 4 the next 1

Evil cliffhanger. I love how you end each chapter with delicious sex scenes. The chapters don't need it to be interesting but it's the best frosting ever. Can't wait to see what consequences those two have cooked up for poor tir.

I wonder have you ever read any of the works by Mercedes Lackey? She a scifi-fantasy writer with about 50 books out. Your work seems very similar to hers while still being very original and creative. IF you haven't heard of her check dragon jouster (no yaoi *pout*) and Valdemar (some yaoi Hurray)series. I think you will enjoy them.

Well I'm off to wait patiently as possible for your next chapter. Thanks for sharing

I like that their relationships are evolving and they are learning more about each other :D I'm really looking forward to reading more, thanks for writing!

yay!! and then the hatchling comes up to tir and interrupts him because she wants to be scrubbed some more. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA

u made my heart flutter
loooooooooove thhis story

great chapter!