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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this so far. I am interested to see what is going to happen to Aiden.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing start. Never seen a story quite like this one. Please keep going; it's really well written and interesting so far. Jonathan is an asshole to the tenth power. *nods*
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting. its really good for a rough draft, though considering Aidan obviously defiant nature ( since he stands up to his father who abuses him), i would expect a little more verbal resistance from him? or if he already broken, then maybe you can explain that more clearly.
apart from that im hooked. i hope you will update soon, since im looking fwd to see what happens.
apart from that im hooked. i hope you will update soon, since im looking fwd to see what happens.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this first chapter! more please!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so most amateur vampire fics I've found have really sucked, but the beginning of this seems promising.
Hopefully the second chapter will live up to the first?
Hopefully the second chapter will live up to the first?
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi-fives to you.
Nicely paced; kept my interest from beginning to end.
The plot seems pretty engaging. Just be careful that this
doesn't turn out to be another superfluous cliche vamp-on-boy fic.
Awesome job
~WR
Nicely paced; kept my interest from beginning to end.
The plot seems pretty engaging. Just be careful that this
doesn't turn out to be another superfluous cliche vamp-on-boy fic.
Awesome job
~WR