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for All Roses Wilt in Time

by KayeFierch

schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I'm intrigued! I like your style of writing as well. Kudos!
person kikib77
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update?
person Bastian
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo another chapter! Aww poor Aiden his dad seriously deserves to be tought a lesson. And if he is Williams toy then why doesn't he just take the boy away from it all to where he can play with him freely and be the only one 'breaking' him?

Great chapter and I look forward to the next one!
person Gnome
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You've created a very intriguing situation. I wish I had more to say but that is the problem when the writing and the story are good.
person Saminada
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man! What a great story!!! XDD :D I loved it!!!

I hope that William helps Aidan (or even better, kill his 'father'!) He's obviously not loved at all in that family! T___T So sad... *sniff*

Anyways I think that ur writing is truly beautiful! I love everything about this fic so far! And I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to poor Aidan now! ><

Thanks alot for the awesome story! I loved it! *hugs*
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for updating!!!! it seems that william is starting to care for aidan even if he doesn't want to admit it... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
ASOTA
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the next update pleeease ^__^ I'm usually not into vampire stories but I felt like giving this one a shot and I love it. Especially Aidan; he's the perfect combination of smart ass and cute as hell *squeals*. In one chapter you should have Aidan call William "Billy" just to piss him off XD And as my one critism: I can kinda tell this was a rough draft. Though it was good, I couldn't fully get into it, you know. But I bet it'll be wonderful when you make it into a final draft. =) Hurry with the next chapie please!
person Sekre
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! Has me interested.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I'm curious as to what's going to happen next, keep it up.
person szaugg
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this one looks lovely. Both characters have definitely caught my interest, and poor little Aidan. he needs cuddles. heh.