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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story between the godesses
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo! i got an account just to review your story!!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I loved the picture too. It is exactly how I pictured her in my head. I cannot wait to see more.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delancy is alright from that picture, one thing that i think would greatly improve it would be to make her hair a little more natural looking make her hair a little darker
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WFK, don't you worry about those nobodies that are putting +1 ratings on your stories, everybody who reads your stories know they are worth more then a +5 rating
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going! it gets much much better!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... :look:
I, personally, love your overactive imagination. Kinda reminds me of mine back when I could write... only better. Every opportunity I get alone on the computer, I check your story... and I look forward to the grand finale :D. This is definitely one I'll have to save some where so that I can go back and read it anytime.
But I'm babbling. Love your work :)
I, personally, love your overactive imagination. Kinda reminds me of mine back when I could write... only better. Every opportunity I get alone on the computer, I check your story... and I look forward to the grand finale :D. This is definitely one I'll have to save some where so that I can go back and read it anytime.
But I'm babbling. Love your work :)
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another beautifully written chapter that was amazing, your descriptions are as vibrant as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how do you come up with all the charcters names??
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
best chapter yet! I like how she stood up to falon and Im so excited to read about the vampire. ohoh! period- female in heat. great idea