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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, fastastic so ****** good that i just speechless.
reading this & listening to "promiscuous" by nelly furtado really heat up the scene...
this is a really good piece... dont get a lot of stories with the dangerous yet sexy fur face....
Bring it on, more fur-face smut plz
reading this & listening to "promiscuous" by nelly furtado really heat up the scene...
this is a really good piece... dont get a lot of stories with the dangerous yet sexy fur face....
Bring it on, more fur-face smut plz
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good though the mispelling is a little off putting and the constant jumping around is a little confusing... and I'm really interested to know how they met. Just a thought. Not trying to diss the story, I really like it, just trying to give you some advice.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, do continue lol.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly loving it... He's the perfect guy
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good, very hot, please keep going with it
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. You definitely should continue. The female lead in this story has some great character, and I like the way you infused her personality into the writing in the first and last chaps. Only probs: just some grammar/sp, and I was a little confused at some points whether she was were herself or not, did it say somewhere she was shifting? Anywho, great story. Looking forward to the next ch.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love a good lemon. Really i do. But can you add a little angst.. like after their amazing sex.. cant she get depressed because.. her plan didnt work. I mean he didnt ask her to marry him.. didnt do anything. I would be pissed idk about you. and when he sences her depression you can show the softer side of him. because if his mate is in some distress he is going to want to protect her and comfort her.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!! Its so raw, yet cute at the same time! Myron is the ultimate alpha male.. :)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was great! i absolutly loved it! really hot!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!