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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
newcomer to your story true, but i found you on the latest done. i couldnt look away from the screen till i had read everything. im lookin forward to everything.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i really liked your story and i got hooked in to it in just day. i don't know when you last updated this story but, you need to finish this story. it is really like a real relationship, which is another reason i enjoyed reading this. i look forward to reading enfen's mate. thanks for a great story.
p.s. i'm one of those people who just created an account for this.
p.s. i'm one of those people who just created an account for this.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAarggh! I read to the end and it ends on a cliffhanger! I love your story... I hope you update soon. Don't let the ignorant flames get to you... they're just usually under-agers trying to look older than they really are. Their grammar gives them away every time. Stay true to yourself and ignore them!
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm a new reader of your story, and I've got to say it is extremely enjoyable!
I love the characters- there's such a plethora of them. Admittedly, I didn't really like Myron's southern accent for a while, but it got endearing later on. Also, your vocabulary is excellent though your spelling and things can be tweaked a bit. If you need any help with beta-work or such, contact me :)
About the vampires. My initial reaction was negative, but I think it was mostly because I was loving the werewolves so very much. The vampires seemed like an unnecessary curveball away from the main story, but now I realize that you've wrapped things up with their presence. Most people couldn't have pulled that off so eloquently and well- props to you! Your imagery is delicious, and I absolutely adore the way your mind works. Very kinky! I think my favorite character is actually Enfer- seems like the kind of guy who would stick by a girl no matter what. I don't like Myron for the reasons Delancey can't fall in love with him yet. Hopefully you'll change him a bit. I wish he'd do something already!
Please continue, and don't let the flames get you down! It's a sign that your writing is original. You have a lot more supporters than critics. And it is funny to think that these people are getting riled up over something you wrote... it's a STORY. Your writing shows great promise, and I hope you update soon.
I love the characters- there's such a plethora of them. Admittedly, I didn't really like Myron's southern accent for a while, but it got endearing later on. Also, your vocabulary is excellent though your spelling and things can be tweaked a bit. If you need any help with beta-work or such, contact me :)
About the vampires. My initial reaction was negative, but I think it was mostly because I was loving the werewolves so very much. The vampires seemed like an unnecessary curveball away from the main story, but now I realize that you've wrapped things up with their presence. Most people couldn't have pulled that off so eloquently and well- props to you! Your imagery is delicious, and I absolutely adore the way your mind works. Very kinky! I think my favorite character is actually Enfer- seems like the kind of guy who would stick by a girl no matter what. I don't like Myron for the reasons Delancey can't fall in love with him yet. Hopefully you'll change him a bit. I wish he'd do something already!
Please continue, and don't let the flames get you down! It's a sign that your writing is original. You have a lot more supporters than critics. And it is funny to think that these people are getting riled up over something you wrote... it's a STORY. Your writing shows great promise, and I hope you update soon.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have fun reading you story! actually im a little bit scared to get on the computer because I can never stop reading and end up skipping my homework!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so you have a big ego? well I guess... a wise friend of mine once told me everyone has to have a big somthing... and I dont know about you but I would rather have a big ego than a big mouth to give bad reviews with..
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh! the heart break you described his anger so well I could almost feel it well up inside of me!!!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I want more... I want more now... this is really good, so I want more...
Yea, I gave up on the in-depth review of braininess. Now I'm going with "encouragement to the point of brutality", as if that makes any sense :P.
You are loved therefore you have to finish this story sooner rather than later.
Later :D
Yea, I gave up on the in-depth review of braininess. Now I'm going with "encouragement to the point of brutality", as if that makes any sense :P.
You are loved therefore you have to finish this story sooner rather than later.
Later :D
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really like your story! i have been hooked on this since i started reading! really really good! =D haha! im really in love with myron!
keep up the good work pretty!
keep up the good work pretty!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in love with mortality... i dont think I quite comprehend hope you elaborate more on that in the next chapter!!! ^___^ this chapter is offically my second favorite next to the one introduceing the wolf queen and the blood queen