rate_review Reviews

The accent is good-I like it, it makes the characters different. This chapter was of the past right? Its interesting to see what they have gone through together and see their relationship form. I feel so bad that his brother died thoguh-it seems very harsh and cruel that someone would do that just out of spite-but it was a good chapter-can't wait for more!

a few mistakes here and there, but all in all, i would have to say that it was really good!

All of your characters are so unique its amazing! You'd think that Myron would have gotton his revenge on his brother but he didn't, which in my opinion, was a very good move. When there is no mystery, there is no reason for the reader to come back for more. So far everything is going really good. The storyline is perfect and so are your characters. Can't wait to see how everyone has developed. I love that Delancy is a strong women. Too many women now-a-days are weak and fragil. We need more strong female leading ladies! Anyways, as someone has already said, the accents are wonderful. A great addition to the people in your story. I thought i would have been put off by Myron's but he is just, sexy. Very very good. Keep it up. Can't wait to see more!

meadow

hm... wat a new twist. :)

I love the personality you gave Myron it fits him very well.

Wow..this is fantastic can't wait for more soon.

Another update. Wow. You are my favorite person right now. But you last chapter - what a suspense - urrghh your killing me here. Hmm... wonder what is the Byron deal and the whole meeting. Guess Myron will show blood with Byron's last comment there eh. Myron's southern accent is sexy. I love it! I also love the way you include Gabriel in the story. You kinda showed a soft side of Myron without being too soft! Super love it! Keep it up.

I find this story really refreshing. Your characters are really sexy and very unique. More please

I love that he has the deep southern accent... but the dahlin doesnt sound southern.. like when I heard it I was like.. ? .. but than you said that it was southern.. idk.. I like your charactors though. I feel so bad about his best friend.. that is really really sad. But I love how the whole scent thing went.. I am a sucker for markings and scent things.. I loved that he is like she smells different.. like PUPS! I just love that word.. so carnal and animalistic.. not that I am into beasty I just love werewolves.. or were anything for that matter.. O and vampires.. I love the neck bitting thing.. that is kind of like marking

wow! other than minor typos, this story keeps me riveted... darn it! i want to know what happens next! :)