rate_review Reviews

I really like the characters. I appreciate a strong female character that is able to stand on her own two feet, but loves that she has a strong man to lean on when she wants. I love the strong man that can keep up with a capable woman. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update.

Wow, I'm really glad to see you updated. This is one of the better stories I've read. I love that your sense of humor is present in your writing. "Amazing. Wonderful. Sexy. Yummy. Food." I love it. As I said before, I think it's great that the characters' personalities color the writing. It's clear when it's Myron narrating because it's so raw and animalistic. The accent's great, btw. It's obvious you spent time developing his character, especially when you leave little clues that suggest Myron is not all caveman but also sensitive and passionate (when no one's looking). ^.~ As for the PoV, I think you should choose whichever is most comfortable for you, but definitely choose one or the other. You lose your audience when you suddenly switch between chapters. I love your style. The story flows and you keep the reader guessing; there are no slow points. I like that you started at the end of the story and tell the story from there. It's unique and a good strategy since we can usually predict the endings of romances. You've gotten to the good stuff. ^.~ I have only two suggestions. One, be careful about throwing too much unfamiliar territory at the reader at once. Markings, etc. Two, I recommend a beta for those pesky little errors. I'd be happy to help if you don't have one already. bookworm_reading@yahoo.com Looking forward to your next update! :D

I like Delancy, she's got guts, and an inner strength. You have to be pretty strong if not very special to be a mate to a Wear. This is a great story, lots of twists and turns. I love the fact that we get a little history on them before she makes him propose to her. LOL

I can't wait to see this battle you have set up! FUN!!

No I like Delancy-she is unique, right now though she does seem a little tame compared to how she is at the beginning of the story. Either POV is ok-its always good to mix the story up and have everyone's views interact in it.

lovely chapter, indeed. of course, lovely accent as well. and u describe the characters very well; it makes it so easy to picture them. i'm having a bit of trouble distinguishing delacancy, though. u say she's well rounded, but not fat, at least a size 13. it kind of confuses me. is she skinny, or no? anyways, hope u'll update soon, and give us a longer chapter

I really like this story. I try to read a lot of werewolf stories that don't involve them falling in love with a werewolf hunter. So don't you dare stop with this story cause I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

I like her as a strong female character but Myron's pov chapters seem to be better.

I LOVE YOUR STORY AND BOTH CHARACTERS, ALTHOUGH I WISH YOU WOULD MAKE THE UD'S LONGER! ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK THIS STORY IS GETTING INTRIGUING! PLZ UD SOON!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOUR STORY AND BOTH CHARACTERS, ALTHOUGH I WISH YOU WOULD MAKE THE UD'S LONGER! ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK THIS STORY IS GETTING INTRIGUING! PLZ UD SOON!!!!!!!!!