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This is very intreging. Write faster. I love this story, it's vary original.

please can u make the chapters a little longer..lol..i get so frustrated when i get to the end so fast...lol....thanks ur doing a great job

This is a great story.
I like both your lead characters.
I look forward to the showdown.

Oh my. You updated. Personally this is not one of my favorite chapter. Although if I think about it, I think this chapter is vital for the succeeding chapters. I love delancy. She is unque and does not portray a weakling character. I think it is essentia to have a strong female character to match with the alpha leading male character. Although, I rather like Myron not showing any kind fear. I dinf in this last chapter you made Myron a little weak on the side. I know they just show that Myron is also vulnerable in ome aspect. But you started with this big almighty Myron and personally I like him better that way. But anyhow, keep up the good work/. Can't wait for more.

I love your characters. I also love delancy she's marvelous. But I am kind of confuse with size 13? More please.

This is amrvelous. Thanks for updating. Happy New Year!

OH!!!!! please, please, please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Care to update again....now?

OMG ud soon plz!!!!! i love ur story, it's so intriguing!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz ud soon!!!

I love myrons pov better because he is more animalistic.. and crude so he just tells what it is.. you know what I mean.. he comes right out and says that her smell makes him so fucking hard that his pants are going to rip at any given moment.