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for Beast's Mate

by DecadenceRefined

person strangerdanger89
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have seen this stroy around but never thought of reading it till tonight.
I have to say wow I love it! I can't wait for more!!
It is wonderful how you bring out the animal in these characters! I can almost feel it!
I was confused when it changed to the restrant then the byous, but alas I cought on.
I love it!!
Can't wait to read more.. I'll be waiting to read another chapter.

later
strangerdanger89
person skolli
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far and I love your characters. Especially in this chapter we got to see a bit more about Delancy's character, because she accepted that they are all wolves and didn't try to play it down to 'delusions' because of what she saw.
I actually like Byron, because I think he has some really good redeeming qualities and he's sexy. Maybe he will somehow help Delancy and Myron and then he'll find his happily ever after *dreamy sigh*.
person Carnive
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hated the Byron parts but loved the Myron parts!
person ree
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story gets better and better! hope you update soon!
person Laurie Hall
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. I LIKE!!!! Update soon please, I wanna see what happens? I was worried about Byron...now Falon??? Hmm...well,can't wait to read more.
person Sam
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Falon cant fuck her.. so I think she will live.. right. I mean he obviously doesnt want to harm her in anyway because she is his shot at becoming all powerful.. so it would be stupid of him to do that.
person Tasha
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me want more, oh god do i want more pretty pretty please.... MORE
person MSB
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN...this is getting better and better....wonder where I can find a man like that....please hurry an UD
person _KINKY
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one of the first story i've read with straight coupling and i must admit that i enjoyed it. Some aspects i find a bit awkward, but i like your story very much. good job =]
person Blacktea
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but I m getting so anxious! I want to konw what has happened in the past but I also want to know what has happened in the present-you left off with a cliff hanger there! I think the past is becoming more of a focus the present.